My first gun - Benelli M4 Tactical

eric.

Hey guys!

So heres my first gun. Any comment or critique are welcome.

And Ive just started a portfolio blog if you want to check it out.
http://ericeneback.blogspot.com/


Hope you like it!



Wireframe

Flats

Cheers

jacob07777

Damn good job, I can't think of any crits at the moment. Awesome work for a first attempt at a gun!

LEViATHAN

Some minor inaccuracies, mainly the fore grip and sight, but looks pretty neat overall, albeit a bit too dark for my tastes. Could've cut some more polies judging by the wires. Though I understand that the gun is in real life rather bland, you could brighten up the bolt to contrast with the rest of the frame.

eric.

Thanks guys!

LEViATHAN: Could you specify the inaccuracies?

Jarod1872

Pretty sweet man, although I've always thought that gun was incredibly ugly to start with. Nice work though!

eric.

Hehe thanks Jarod! Im not really a gun fan, but maybe it is an ugly gun, I just grabbed one

eric.

Made a new version of it. More like the original.

Hope you like it!

Surface

the new texture is way better, adds much more realism to it. The scratch on the left side of the gun right in the middle takes a bit too much attention and looks a bit dodgy, try removing it real quick and then preview it, small change but it would prob look a tad bit better , also the loops on your handle could of been ended a BIT earlier, not necessarily follow through all the way around, to save a few tris Overall great work!!!

Racer445

It's much better now with less grunge, however it's far, far too dark. It's near pitch black for me.

eric.

Surface: Thanks man! Yeah, I noticed that the scatches there were a little too dodgy.

Racer445: Thanks! I guess it looks nicer without the grunge, but its so boring to make it all clean looking, and to easy imo To dark, huh? Hmm, well, for me it isnt. I can try to brighten it up a notch, but from the ref I used it is really dark too, so. Well, it should look nice to everyone, so I'll brighten it up

Working on a red dot sight atm. Have barely started, but it is on its way!

**Edit: Oh, almost forgot! I really enjoyed your tutorial racer, the AK one. Thanks for that! I liked the brushes