One thing that stands out to me is that your framing elements around the perimeter have strong lines directing the eye to the king but they get lost in all the blackness. I think maybe if there was more of an edge highlight then it might read a bit better. Other than that, looks good, wouldnt mind having him dj my parties.
Lovely atmosphere and colours! The way the surgeon's hands enter the frame feels a bit awkward to me though. It's how close together they seem, and how straight. Makes it look like they're doing their best to consciously stay out of the frame.
Looking good so far, though I think youre missing a lot of the color from the film, especially the parts with him flying above the city. I did a Photoshop adjustment to show what I mean
As for presentation have you thought about the box art shot? It's pretty iconic
I'm looking at it, for what it's worth! I really love the direction this is going in. If you manage to keep the simple shapes you've got in the concept for the end result, and don't over-complicate it with the texturing, this could turn out great! With the little toy robot though, I feel as if that's already a bit too detailed to fit with the chunky shapes you've got going on. Have you considered stylising it?
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The way the surgeon's hands enter the frame feels a bit awkward to me though. It's how close together they seem, and how straight. Makes it look like they're doing their best to consciously stay out of the frame.
As for presentation have you thought about the box art shot? It's pretty iconic
I really love the direction this is going in. If you manage to keep the simple shapes you've got in the concept for the end result, and don't over-complicate it with the texturing, this could turn out great!
With the little toy robot though, I feel as if that's already a bit too detailed to fit with the chunky shapes you've got going on. Have you considered stylising it?