Mass Effect: Assault Rifle (WIP)

Joshflighter

This is the Mass Effect Assault rifle I started yesterday. This is my first Sub-divided model that was fully made to be finished.



Thanks to Disaster for keeping an eye over me a lot of the time, and giving me hints/tips. I owe you big time man. Thanks.

DEElekgolo

Disaster? I thought I was the one that helped you.

Racer445

I'd round out a lot of the shapes, especially the top. The design isn't too pleasant to look at with all those really hard shapes.

torontoanimator

perna wrote: »

*Betray'd*

epicl fail D=

Disaster

Nah, I was the one who watched over him and helped him the most dee. I watched him model in teamviewer for like 3 hours and gave him hints and tips and help everytime he needed them. I also taught him to sub'd model and showed him a few modifiers he didn't know how to use.

Not saying you didn't help him but I know I helped him the most ^_^

Cheers. Also, Yeah I agree with racer, the mesh needs to be rounded off a bit.

MoP

i think you'll find i helped the most!

looks pretty good, but definitely too... boxy. need some nicer swooping curves instead of all the straight lines, then it'll look more sci-fi

Joshflighter

You helped me with one thing and then showed me other stuff that I didn't need for this. I don't mean to sound like an ass, but if I were to thank you, then I have to thank racer, cause I watch the first parts of his recent tuts. Hope this doesn't sound offensive.
But so I dont sound like an ass, Thanks Dee, and Racer!

looks pretty good, but definitely too... boxy. need some nicer swooping curves instead of all the straight lines, then it'll look more sci-fi

Yea, I agree.

Racer445 wrote: »

I'd round out a lot of the shapes, especially the top. The design isn't too pleasant to look at with all those really hard shapes.
-Mass effect ingame pic here-

Yea, I will render it now:



I wont be working on this one anymore. Thanks a lot for the crit guys. I will apply it to my next model.