Thats pretty freakin sweet dude, and I can only imagine how much more disgusting it will looks with some textures on it lol. Some cards that have like goo strings dangling from his teeth would be pretty cool.
not sure if u are looking for crits but one flaw that i often see in most models is the way people model the toes. your toes are arranged absolute straight in a row and that makes them look very rigid. only stylized anime characters usually get away with toes like that but since you are going with realism you need to get the basics of that area more organic. look up some photo reference to see what i mean.
good work on the fatty areas though. you could use more asymmetry on the flesh over all.
pretty nice in all the details. Hand bones are a bit wonky.
wish the posture of the back showed a bit more weight of the tongue though like the sculpture shows. Seems like there could be a little more counterbalance/curvature of the spine going on there.
this is looking so sick! i really agree about the toes... they should also shorten as they taper out, yours seem to all be the same length right now. Same goes for the hands and fingers. All your knuckles are in a pretty straight row and should move further back towards the wrist from index to pinky. :thumbup::thumbup:
wow this is awesome i love what you have done with it!, the mouth and tounge are great delightfully disgusting!, also nice work on the rolls they have nice gravity to them.
CC: please add some slime or drool on the tounge for the final! to add a bit more gross!
Thanks alot guys, your disgust is telling me my demon has accomplished his mission. Now lets make him even more revolting!
After reading though your comments and crits I went back and made some changes accordingly.
Mainly the feet thing, moving around the toes, and giving the tongue some more edgeloops, for that smoother bendy...tongue...action...*cough*.
Luckily I had some tris to spare, so the model is still under 10k yay. Its exactly 9.9k now which leaves me with 100 tris I might use for some drool...
Doing some quick color variations right now, will post em soon.
So I was looking at some nurgle and slaanesh demons for inspiration + some zombies, and did some overpaints. Not sure yet which one I like myself, though the green one is maybe a little too wierd.
Blood splatter?
Gonna do some more overpaints.
CC is welcome as usuall.
This is really cool. Also props to the original character designer for pushing everything so far.
I like the bottom right one, the pale skin and the red tongue makes for a nice contrast. Don't be afraid to push that saturation. I like the blood splatters, they're just a little too dominant in the paintover, I think.
Just to see how it looks, I combined your first two paintovers and added some redness here and there; I'd say the green version you currently have is indeed a bit too much, but green is still a nicely sickening colour.
But then, I really like the colder versions you made too. Great work!
hold on.. i think i just.. yea... yea i just threw up in my mouth a little bit. I guess that means, job well done!
is it possible to even animate this? i see the rig there but curious to know if you can animate this, especially that long 'waterslide' lookin' tongue.
green ones tongue, with the bottom left ones skin!
Yes to blood, just more and different ages of blood. Some blood from a month or older, some blood from yesterday, and some from five minuets ago, all layered on top of each other.
Gotta go with godzero....bottom left with the tongue shade from the green version. Also, with the blood...I wouldnt go crazy with it. Adding some to his feet and fat rolls in that lower body area would be convincing seeing as with the way his weight is distributed, his body would drag on the ground for the most part. And obviously around his mouth and tongue. It would also be pretty sick to see some nasty bulging veins in his tongue...maybe also some saliva hanging from the top of his mouth and a pool of drool near the bottom lip. The skin would also benefit from some veins just to show he's got some blood running through him of his own. Keep the updates coming man...it's lookin pretty nastay
GOBEE: Actually the upper body is suprisingly animate'able. Especially the arms and tongue work great. I might do a little gif just to show it off. The feet though are very tuff to move around without the fat just streching around. I would need to rigg and bone the fatflaps for more control.
I'm glad most of you liked the bottom left one, since thats the one I started texturing. Gonna do the tongue you wanted aswell.
I agree about all the little details, and I'm gonna try do them all (blood, veins, drool). Maybe some dirt around the feet and lower fat thats been draging on the ground. This is gonna be fun...
Work got a little busier today (doing 3d at work and then 3d at home is exhausting ), and I'm also working on a new portfolio homepage, so next update might be a little later this week.
love that grime good work. maybe adding some light skin revealed from cracking from his skin stretching, if it could make sense and look right. nice work!
I'd like to see some stretchmarks, its a trademark feature of obese people! I'd also like to see some blistering and other stuff that severely obese people suffer from, often from lack of movement and hygiene. Think infected bedsores.
Don't search for references right before or after you eat tho. :P That shit is nasty!
looks damn awesome some more details to give that extra pop and this would be 5 stars ! for example his mouth needs lips or some indication of that, migh also help breaking out the skin and also what slash suggests, great work man , congrats !
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fix, please, k, thx.
nice model!
But hey i dont see my name on it, I will claim, I helped delete a few edge loops ontop of being the moral support I am. I should be in the credits!
good work on the fatty areas though. you could use more asymmetry on the flesh over all.
wish the posture of the back showed a bit more weight of the tongue though like the sculpture shows. Seems like there could be a little more counterbalance/curvature of the spine going on there.
I LOVE IT!
The toolbag strikes again FTW!
this is looking so sick! i really agree about the toes... they should also shorten as they taper out, yours seem to all be the same length right now. Same goes for the hands and fingers. All your knuckles are in a pretty straight row and should move further back towards the wrist from index to pinky. :thumbup::thumbup:
Great proportions and attention to detail.
Good job!
That tongue is fascinating btw!
CC: please add some slime or drool on the tounge for the final! to add a bit more gross!
-Woog
After reading though your comments and crits I went back and made some changes accordingly.
Mainly the feet thing, moving around the toes, and giving the tongue some more edgeloops, for that smoother bendy...tongue...action...*cough*.
Luckily I had some tris to spare, so the model is still under 10k yay. Its exactly 9.9k now which leaves me with 100 tris I might use for some drool...
Doing some quick color variations right now, will post em soon.
It's funny you tagged it NSFW "tits", it made me look at it in a disgusting way :P
Blood splatter?
Gonna do some more overpaints.
CC is welcome as usuall.
I like the bottom right one, the pale skin and the red tongue makes for a nice contrast. Don't be afraid to push that saturation. I like the blood splatters, they're just a little too dominant in the paintover, I think.
But then, I really like the colder versions you made too. Great work!
is it possible to even animate this? i see the rig there but curious to know if you can animate this, especially that long 'waterslide' lookin' tongue.
Yes to blood, just more and different ages of blood. Some blood from a month or older, some blood from yesterday, and some from five minuets ago, all layered on top of each other.
the tongue is awesome.
GOBEE: Actually the upper body is suprisingly animate'able. Especially the arms and tongue work great. I might do a little gif just to show it off. The feet though are very tuff to move around without the fat just streching around. I would need to rigg and bone the fatflaps for more control.
I'm glad most of you liked the bottom left one, since thats the one I started texturing. Gonna do the tongue you wanted aswell.
I agree about all the little details, and I'm gonna try do them all (blood, veins, drool). Maybe some dirt around the feet and lower fat thats been draging on the ground. This is gonna be fun...
Work got a little busier today (doing 3d at work and then 3d at home is exhausting
Sorry, been busy with stuff and work, but here's a little something.
The tongue is nice and...moist.
and scaled down texturemaps
Still have to do that blood spatter and try out slime when I have the time.
Comments and crits are welcome as always.
Cheers.
I'd like to see some stretchmarks, its a trademark feature of obese people! I'd also like to see some blistering and other stuff that severely obese people suffer from, often from lack of movement and hygiene. Think infected bedsores.
Don't search for references right before or after you eat tho. :P That shit is nasty!