First Character

CammieDee666

For which Engine - None
Current Polycount - 468(None TS) 14'884(TS 2)
Max Polycount - None
Texture Size - N/A
Description of background information on piece - My first character and im looking for crits
Where are you looking to receive criticism - Everywhere :thumb:
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Rokkx

Could you post some wire's of your model?
It's a lot easier to critique when we can see the topology of your model

CammieDee666

Sorry guys i forgot to upload the wires

OzMa

Well, for start you need to define more the anatomy of the body just like the shoulders and torso. You have a lot of edge loops in the legs and arms that you don't need... and in your reference draw the arms are a bit short.

t4paN

A good idea is to create your base mesh with even lower polycounts and then add cuts for detail with quickslice or by chamfering some edge loops. Right now you have a lot of unsued loops in the legs and arms, as OzMa said.

Also, take a look at Ben Mathis' site, http://www.poopinmymouth.com/tutorial/tutorial.htm , he's got some of the best and simplest tutorials you can find for a lot of stuff. You should also try to model the head.

Well done for your first try though.