Hi! Finally I'v manage to put some ideas together and I'm joning this game. it's pleasure to take part in this exclusive contest. Good luck to everyone.
Hi Gabriel, good luck this year! Your basemesh is looking pretty damn good, but I think you zbrush sculpting is mushing up your mechanical bits. it looks good on the leather, but the shoulderpads look especially mushy. I think you should smooth a bit, and use the flatten brush and pinch brush to drive those edges to a tighter and cleaner finish.
Good start so far. I think you need to do something unique with the head though to make it not just another guy in badass heavy armor. Keep up the great work.
yea, the head is going to make or break this one, but I think you have a strong base to work off of.
I really like the level of detail in the upper chest and those accordion tubes are always cool.
the rings detail on his left shoulder really makes that side pop. it's an interesting bit of 'old' in the new.
you might think of some sort of prop for him (her?) to pose with
no comments?
damn solid modelling, really strong skills, man!
crit: those chains and big shoulder pad- weakest parts of that piece, i would try to make it in another way, u know.
keep going!
Dude, your character will be a kill if it is well textured.
I mean, there is so much interesting materials on it you could
play with (At least steel, rubber, plastic, leather and skin).
Really really great work on the sculpt!
Those are some wicked mits (gloves) you got there!
Additionally, I like the extra love you gave to your hard-surface in zbursh.:thumbup:
I think you could make the fabric lines a bit more crisp and "readable" but thats just minor nitpicking. Other it looks really slick!
The hat you gave him is a bull's-eye. He is a privet but in the same time very original and awesome. Can't wait to see hem textured with all the green and shiny things from the concept of yours.
Pro work!
nrek: Here they are:) finally... 9800 tris. remaining 200 i will take for some effects like smoke and liquid for that guy.
WarNoodle: the gloves are his weapon. the right one is armed for final kill shot:)
The cloth sculpt around his chest could probably have been a little bit more refined, but it's not too bad.
My main crit right now would be his legs have a very plain silhouette, I might try to quickly push his kneepads out a bit more to break up that very "soft" curve he has in the lower leg.
Common Gabriel!
This guy is a bad ass. I love the moustache and this gentle steam punk feeling in him.
I'm waiting for finals! Keep up the brilliant work. Textures modelling lightning, everything rocks!
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Im happy with the overall look of this character. I will detail that concept in my free time.
Im creating base model now.
Fast Zbrush Sculpting and after that Retopology.
I really like the level of detail in the upper chest and those accordion tubes are always cool.
the rings detail on his left shoulder really makes that side pop. it's an interesting bit of 'old' in the new.
you might think of some sort of prop for him (her?) to pose with
its time to sculpt this in zbrush a little. Do you like it?
damn solid modelling, really strong skills, man!
crit: those chains and big shoulder pad- weakest parts of that piece, i would try to make it in another way, u know.
keep going!
Conte: Maybe with some more time I could do something about it but it's kinda late and at this stage difficoult to make major adjustments:(:(
and now little zbrush:
Kozlow
I mean, there is so much interesting materials on it you could
play with (At least steel, rubber, plastic, leather and skin).
Really really great work on the sculpt!
update:
Additionally, I like the extra love you gave to your hard-surface in zbursh.:thumbup:
I think you could make the fabric lines a bit more crisp and "readable" but thats just minor nitpicking. Other it looks really slick!
almost final model i hope:
The hat you gave him is a bull's-eye. He is a privet but in the same time very original and awesome. Can't wait to see hem textured with all the green and shiny things from the concept of yours.
Pro work!
Kozlow
lowres done:) ufffffff
WarNoodle: the gloves are his weapon. the right one is armed for final kill shot:)
Thanks!!
The cloth sculpt around his chest could probably have been a little bit more refined, but it's not too bad.
My main crit right now would be his legs have a very plain silhouette, I might try to quickly push his kneepads out a bit more to break up that very "soft" curve he has in the lower leg.
i have Hogan's Wip textures and wip light setup from Modo. i hope you like it.
this is incredible
New WIP. test Pose and fixed light.
This guy is a bad ass. I love the moustache and this gentle steam punk feeling in him.
I'm waiting for finals!
Kozlow
I cant wait to see your final images!
i think its final:( time go to sleep.