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First poast! Characters

Hi! I'm new here. I'm an Art Institute student.
Below I have two of my most recent characters and their modle sheets. Both characters are not finished but I would greatly appreciate feedback to help me on my way. Thank you in advanced for your time and feedback.
The owl is 3,917 tris.
Barn_Owl_Character_Sheet_by_Rikku2007.jpg
wireframe_barn_owl_character_by_Rikku2007.jpg
3D_Barn_owl_character_colored_by_Rikku2007.jpg
The goat is 3,966 tris.
Volcanic_Goat_Character_Sheet_by_Rikku2007.jpg
wireframe_lava_goat_by_Rikku2007.jpg
Thanks again

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  • Rikku2007
    Here's an update on my lava goat. Any honest constructive feedback would be much appreciated. Thank you for your time.
    3D_Lava_goat_colored_by_Rikku2007.jpg
  • Nemecys
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    Nemecys polycounter lvl 9
    I like your concept art, very well drawn and displays your idea well and generally very appealing,

    model wise the wings on the owl could do with smoothing off the points behind and under his arms, the diffuse looks a tad flat.. maybe you could add a normal map, make the feathers look more alive

    same thing for the demon mainly, especially him a good normal map all round he looks like he should be made of rock and full of cracks help show that and you will have some very nice looking models

    otherwise good work for your first characters, or post whichever =D
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