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Brett!

Well, here it goes again. I'm planning on doing a demon prince, Lust is his name. The idea behind this is that the child has been corrupted by lust and evil, thus the name. The women pretty much hold him up and help guide his movements. He leaves a trail of plague behind his path. He also sprouts flowers wherever he stands, which soon after rot and turn into more plague. The same thing happens when he kills his enemies. Beautiful at first, then pure evil...just like real women Anyway, here are some quick doodles.





So far I like 4, and B. It's all very rough still though.

Also, I'm new here, so nice to meet you all.

claydough

elements of 2 and 3. in 2 the entourage is floating which iz creepy ( nice upside down pyramid shape adds to the the Metaphysical vibe )

In 3 it looks like the witch iz covering both of the innocents eyes which is very creepy ( totally blind reinforces the innocent as being "driven" ( an idiot savant vehicle that floats ))

more?

Muzzoid

Hey meatbag!

Cool concepts you have here so far.

I agree with claydough, the pyramid composition is really creepy and awesome .

Mezz

Nice to meet you

I like how #1 looks to me the best. I like the feeling of him being more surrounded by the women. Cool idea, can't wait to see where it goes.

StJoris

Hey welcome to the boards! Nice flowing style man, I like B best It's got a nice movement going on.

Brett!

Thanks guys. I'm planning on using these as the final thumbnails. I really want to get model sheet and thumbs done early, so I can get the final to look amazing. I'm liking the last one on the bottom the most.



and I tried the leg cover on the last one, but I still prefer the original


Keep the advice coming boys.

Mezz

Brett! wrote: »

Keep the advice coming boys and girls.

Fixed


I really like the third one best, with the legs mostly covered in dark fog. Not such a fan of him floating above the ground. It makes him seem too in control. When his legs look trapped in darkness, then I think it gives a better feeling for him being steeped in darkness.
Nice stuff, keep it up!

bounchfx

this idea is so freaking kick ass. definitely like the floating vs legs covered, bottom one of the latest four

Jesse Moody

Ooooh I'm liking this. I also like the floating one.

machuca

the top right one is my fav. has the covered legs which make him looked trapped. and has this silhouette at the top that makes it look like there is something evil controlling him.

Beautiful at first, then pure evil...just like real women

:thumbup:

wretchedgoat

wow is this interesting and creepy, really looking to see where this goes.

i really like the bottom left one of the second batch as well, i like the heart-like shape the women surrounding him are forming.

keep it coming!

claydough

the throng's eye gaze ( and head tilt ) centered on the child may reinforce composition.
( cept lust's gaze at viewer fer creepiness )

A body throng reference: link

Brett!

Ok, trying to get the composition of the thing down.


and a kinda half-ass 3/4 view.

The back of the design seems to be lacking though

Added some more mass. I'll probably have some other secondary faces distorting in the darkness, like spirits or something.

AimBiZ

Very, VERY interesting design! I like the hovering version you're going for now. Perhaps the dark mass could make some sharper forms?

Brett!

I didn't like the direction I was going when I tried to draw this beyond a concept. I decided to take another, more demonic look at it and doodled this up. Same basic idea, more crazy The top bodies will warp and turn into the darkness/plague. Maybe too much. but its pushed more than before.



Heres a toned down version.


Also, should i be worried about excessive nudity with all the tits I'm gonna have?

Mezz

Looking really freaky right now.

Out of curiosity, are they all gonna look the same? Or did you just paste the same face for the sake of convenience and they'll all look different?

bounchfx

i really love the idea behind this, glad you're continuing it.
for some sick reason I want to see the boobs rested on his head for the lol factor but that's probably too inappropriate.
darn.

3abden

Wow thats wicked !! looking good man

notebookguy

I understand the idea, question is female nudity art and where does art become obscenity, Is drawing the female form lust or is thinking about the act the time it becomes lust? For what it is worth the drawing is out there last question will the women be all the same race and or will they all be different and what is the race and or perceived race of the male in the figure.

Brett!

heres a little update. Changed the look of the kid to a more painful one. Also tried to make the females look like they were supporting her more, but some people said it now looks like he is being dragged? Advice as usual

ApprenticeEverything

hey! i really like this idea! very origional. but the latest update does make it look like hes being dragged off.

have you tried reversing the cloud of women, so that he floats above them and theyre underneath him, and they trail off like the train of a wedding dress? just an idea.