Glenn Danzig

Carl Brannstrom

Hi everyone.

Trying to make a Danzig bust and im looking for crits.

This is what iwe done sofar:



These are some refs iwe been using:

VikingJim

Good start so far man, Im a huge Danzig fan myself. As for crits go, I would strengthen up his brow ridge a bit, even make it a bit stylized and have him scowl. Also there are slight indentations outside of the corners of his mouth "smile lines" would be unnaceptable for Danzig, possibly "hate lines" lol. if you purse the lips a bit more you can make him look a tad more intimidating. Great start tho, just dont forget those chops later on down the road!

BradMyers82

Nice job so far. I think it will be rather hard to tell how close your are without seeing him with hair (it is for me at least). Have you considered photoshoping some hair in just to give you a rough idea?

crazyfingers

Agree with jim 100%.

Very strong start though man, looking great.

Carl Brannstrom

Thanks for the comments guys!

Here's an update.
Generally worked around the mouth area. I also changed the brows a bit.
As you can see, I also made a paintover for the hair.

JohnnyRaptor

Father! gonna take your daughter out tonite! Oh Father!

Sweet choice dude, im a danzig fan, so rock on and make sure you make it good!

illadam

Nice, Danzig is bad ass. Are you just doing a head bust? I think you should get the shoulders in there too. Looking good so far.

bounchfx

remember when he got his ass knocked the fuck out? that video was sweet.

Carl Brannstrom

@illadam
Yeah I'll just go with the head. It would be cool with his shoulders but I don't think the basemesh has enough polys for that.

@bounchfx
It's fake. Danzig has never lost!!!

Got some hair in:

Carl Brannstrom

Fixed those sideburns.

00Zero

lol. looking very nice.

yea, when that fat dude totally knocked him to the floor. haha

DrillerKiller

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9yA4_tLZFlA[/ame]

lol, that aside, looks pretty good, check your eye shape though.

VikingJim

the wonders of cgi, danzig never falls. he simply bodyslams the earth when he so desires

Two Listen

I might raise the innermost corner of his eyebrows a bit. Right now it's giving him this odd angry look that makes me think more...Peter Steele. That's being pretty nit-picky, though.

Looking good so far, I dig the hair.