sentry droid WIP

robomaniac

was playing with maya, while watching film and got that 15 minute sketch...
now looking forward to texture it and animate...

its around 3k polys

arrangemonk

i like him, but whats the size?
could be tall like a human or contain a cockpit ^^

HAL

I saw your 2d artwork on concept art, really great stuff.
Nice mesh you have there, how many polygons does it have?

Anyways looking forward to see it textured. Keep it up.

Muzzoid

Pretty cool bot .

The modeling is nice, but I'm going to have to attack the design a bit. You are designing using way too many primitive shapes, throw in some cooler shapes and mix it up. A good source of inspiration for that would be to have a browse through robogabos sketchbook on ca.org. Take note of joints, as yours are particularly simple and boring.
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=71911&page=68
(you might have to browse through a few pages .)

Though i must say the main problem is that the proportions don't have a nice feel to them, the torso is the same size as the body and it just doesn't look good. Not to mention the pelvis makes it look like it is in a constant pelvis thrust! mmmm uber pelvis thrust...

hope this little bit of input helps .

rasmus

I like it, its nice and simple, though Muzz makes some good points. Find a bit of purpose to the pelvis (beside thrusting ofcourse), and maybe bend the shins a bit? They look a bit stiff.

robomaniac

thanks ppl, will try to do something withat one... will post soon than