First Attempt

CammieDee666

For which Engine - None
Max Polycount - Dont Care
Description of background information on piece - I just want to learn to model characters and this is my first attempt
Where are you looking to receive criticism - The Model
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pangarang

different strokes for different folks, but i think the body is too high poly at this stage. nail the basic form without making the mesh dense at first, and then add more polys as you work towards finer details.

Axiem

Another thing to remember is your flow of polygons, especially if you plan to pull it into like Zbrush or Mudbox at a later date.

You've got a very dense mesh up near the neck, and I don't think you need that line along the spine. You can probably lose 2-3 of the rings around the neck to make the flow better, without losing much definition.