Main Character

fuxer

Hey everyone!
I want to showcase something im working on as a freelancer.
The model will be diffuse only and currently it weights at 6100 tris.
I have a limit of 7000 tris to spend on other accessories that he might have.
Any crit is welcome,thanks!

mikezoo

Heyy, I like this so far. Reminds me of Christian Bayle in a weird way. Might be the hair.

I would think perhaps a little bit more contrast in the jeans, would help "pop" the texture out.

zenarion

Probably should push the hairline back a bit. Now it looks like he has shaved the bangs, let the hair on top of his head grow long, and used it instead of bangs.

MoP

Heh good catch by zenarion, that hairline does look quite strange ... nice mesh though and the textures are painted nicely, I like the jeans.
Keep it up!

steady

also his nostrils seem a bit small or his nose looks strange overall
other than that nice job!

fuxer

Thanks guys!

The hairline needs a fix,got it!
I worked more on the jacket today but i'm going to show some more pics tomorrow,even close ups.
steady i'll fix the nostrils too.

Daaark

Makes me think of William H Macy being made up to look like Leon Kennedy.

JesterBox

Cross eyed lazer vision SWEET!

I don't know if it's just from the angle of the picture but his neck seems a little thin, and straight.
Looking good, looks like my uncle Kurtis.

fuxer

Hey guys i have been trying to get the jacket done,and finally i can say i'm happy with the results.I already remade it 2 times lol
Anyway,i fixed the forehead and right now im working on the fur.Let me know what you think about jacket and the rest.Ignore the fur for now

Japhir

looks great! from a distance (last pic) his face looks pretty roughed up though (black eye?). up-close it all seems fine but from far away he is either very very tired or drunk, or beaten up pretty badly . great stuff! keep it going!

fuxer

yup japhir,he's supposed to look a little tired like that.I just have to work on the hands now and see what else i can fix before handing him :P

SomberResplendence

I'm digging the texturing, good job

dolemite

Awesome texture! The wires look like there are a lot of extra polies though.


I love the face texture.

brokendragon

Like the texture. The wrinkles to the jeans and the hole are a nice touch. How are you lighting him?

fuxer

thanks alot guys!
dolemite, he has 6100 tris.My given limit was 7000
I finally rigged the model,still there are some places that dont deform well,but i'm fixing them.
Hope you like it.

glib

Aww, he's holding his own hand.

Can we see the texture sheet?

fuxer

lol sure,i'll post it tomorrow

Harry

the nose looks strange somehow, like its curved downwards too extremely

fuxer

Just wanted to post a quick update.
I'm currently making a simple scene to pose him in.
For now,here's the weapon!

culturedbum

Really nice textures man!!!

I'm getting a silent hill vibe from him(which is probably what you were going for right)

anyways only thing that bothers me a little is the ax being too small, Firefighter axes are a bit bigger than that, easy fix tho.

http://en.wikivisual.com/images/c/c7/Firefighter_with_axe.jpg

fuxer

Yep you are right
Thanks. I'll resize it

dolemite

I really like this piece. It's coming out great! Has a very unique charm.

t4paN

fuxer wrote: »

Just wanted to post a quick update.
I'm currently making a simple scene to pose him in.
For now,here's the weapon!

Looks like it's straight out of a future Left 4 Dead mod, nice!

fuxer

mmm l4dead,i've been playing that alot ehehhe
here's an update to the scene.Not really sure about the pose yet,but i'll try to get a better one.Ideas? thanks

Lord McMutton

Maybe more like this?

glib

Carth!

PS. Axe still needs some scaling. The distance from blade to end of spike looks right, as does the width, but it looks too short the other way (height?). A handle length somewhere between yours and the one that Marshal posted would look better IMO.

Lord Ned

I think Marshal nailed it. I was going to say bigger ax and a more pronounced stance.

Gannon

I know this is really kinda off-topic and stupid but if you're presenting it in a reel on that background you should probably make sure that the fence mesh is scaled right it looks weird. >_>

Other then that it's looking pretty spiffy =D

BradMyers82

I agree with the crits so far, especially the scaling bit rdmlegend mentioned. I'm guessing that's a telephone pole in the scene. If that's the case, its way too thin. Looking forward to the final presentations sheets!

Michael Knubben

hey, where'd his cross-eyed laser-eyes go?!

Nice stuff, though. I like the textures. As mentioned before, it really reminds me of l4d

fuxer

Marshal Banana i never used that as a reference.Mostly i had to come up with a face and hair by myself,but the contractor asked me to give him an unshaved look.I wanted to make him a bit older though...
Well thanks for the crits guys,this helped me get a better view of him
Here's the new pose and also the textures.