Haneen ~short movie W.I.P.

3DGURU

it's a short movie , with cartoon style ,
working with a director[Montuser]
and an illustrator[boushra]

the illustrator made us the character reference



the director wrote the scenario

now my job was creating the boy character , there's 3 characters

image

wires


thanks .

his shoulder needs tweaking , i will be working on him after finishing the little girl .

PS : i hope that i don't get insulted if you think i'm not too good , CG isn't my main field .

tanka

You need to work on your proportions, I know it's cartoony but that doesn't mean you can get lazy. His arms are way too small, his torso is huge and his head is kinda caved in. I also don't feel he has much character either, the sketch has style and character (although it is a different character) but the 3d model is quite boring.

Also, there is a huge n-gon on his forehead, you should probably fix that.

3DGURU

those ngons on the forhead are due to image resize and from the interfaces bugs ...
other than this , thanks for your hints .

PS :- it's not textured yet .