Ogre 3D project

MrDev

Hey guys, Long lime lurker, Just gonna post some stuff I'm working on for a friends first Ogre 3D game.

Just some stuff I have as of current, any crits welcome on everything especially the Character, I'm still learning figures.








I didn't have any concepts they were mostly spontaneously modeled so if you have any design improvements I'd be glad to hear them too.

AshleyTayles

The shoulder rest on the weapon looks to boxy and sharp. Try chamfering some of those edges.

NyneDown

It's hard to give a good solid crit with limited info and images....but so far this doesnt "scream" Ogre to me. Typically Ogre's have a lot of mass so you have a lot of forms to play around with. The armor right now looks like it's being built for an average size human dude. Try beefing it up a little. And depending on the size of your ogre, that gun looks like it would be a wee bit tiny for his big ogre hands.

MrDev

Should have made it clearer, Ogre 3D is an open source rendering engine and the project currently doesn't have a name.

I've got some more tweaks to do on the model and I'll get some better pictures up with a head.

System

The gun - looks as if you used only a side view to model it as it is totally flat there. A good remedy would be to remove all optimisations, reconnect edges so that modelling can be completed.
The character - seems too early to be making armour when the body mesh and head mesh have not been created yet.

MrDev

Yea, I'm trying to "unflatten" it

Here's an update to the gun, I'm going to give it a rest for a bit and work on the character model now