Fantasy scene WIP

zberry

Hello, I am currently between freelance work, and have some time to create a personal project. I plan to make a MMO boss battle style scene, with a few adventurers squaring off against a gigantic beast. Here is the work so far, I started with the piece that seemed the most fun to me, the monster head. I'm still working on the sculpt, but I wanted to share what I have so far. C & C welcome.

zberry

Here is some texture work on the dragon head, more updates coming soon.

vik

Looks cool so far. The details on the jaw look less pronounced compared to the rest, is that intentional?

zberry

Thanks Vik, now that you mention it, I agree about the details on the jaw. I think i'll go in and add more small scales to that area.

NyneDown

What's going on zberry...cool to see ya posting here. Looking good so far man. It would be nice to see a little more asymmetry as things look pretty identical on both sides right now. Maybe make the teeth a little more random. Also the protrusions on the snout look a bit weightless...you could probably add some skin/scale stretching to fix that. As Vik mentioned, the details on the jaw look washed out in comparison the rest of the head..it also feels like it's lacking in gravity.

zberry

Thanks for the feedback NyneDown. For now i've been working on one of the hero characters I'd like to do for this project. Crits and comments welcome.

Talbot

I'm not a character artist... but his eyes look a little weird from that angle.

Lord Ned

I think it's more the texture on the bags under his eyes. Or it's the 2d eyelashes.

zberry

Thanks for the feedback, I'll take another look at the eyes. Hopefully getting some eyebrows in will help too.

rooster

did you model it in orthographic camera view?
caused problems for me in zbrush before they added perspective view, specifically the 3/4 angles

cool dragon

zberry

Thanks Rooster. I do use the perspective in Zbrush, I wonder what is off with my model that makes you ask?

jabranbaig

great work