old f1 garage
polycounter lvl 11
This is a simple project I did for one of my 3d classes (3d environments). It's an old abandoned f1 garage. Let me know what you think.
Here's the final render:
Here's the wireframe version:
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Here's the final render:
Here's the wireframe version:
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And the wheels seem to be lacking treads.
Shadow on the wall and the car are in one line that looks awkward.
Also lamp bulbs feel like rusty metal. They don't look like dirty glass. Maybe try to do them less dirty, desaturate a bit and add slight translucency/opacity. Metal pars of lamps themselves blend too much with celing/top of walls because of having the same color.
I would also add some floating dust visible in volume light beams.
Great suggestion but that's matter of opinion. A lot of the showcase vintage racers never had treads. In fact original tires back then never had treads.
It adds a classic feel imo, and doesn't need it.
generally nice texturing the radio need some lovin though loks a liitle flat atm
also girl in background poster doesnt seam to fit time line maybe a nice flapper girl instead
considering some of the tiny details you've spent loads of polys on, the car - the main focus - looks noticeably jaggy, especially around the cockpit
it's all very grungy, while at the same time being incredibly clean for a garage. Where's all the rags and grease and oil? The jacks are resting on what looks like newspaper which is almost pristine. Clean newspaper on the floor of a garage? Never. Slather it in the black stuff
they are supposed to be, its jacked up
Did not see that at all