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Archway WIP

Hey guys, workin on this HL2 mod to throw some more stuff in my portfolio and I need some crit on this one, I get a real amature feel from it and can't pick out what it is (other then my lack of experience on the part thats destructable :( ).

Ref:
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/8276/lisbonrefsm7.jpg

Model:
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1337/otlisbonarchwayrender9ut0.jpg
(no spec or norm map in this one, didnt really feel like it was needed. Also the char artist is modeling an angel and dove props to place on the top of the archway)

Texture:
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2773/otlisbonarchwaytrender0pk4.jpg

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  • cholden
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    cholden polycounter lvl 18
    You reference concept art is great for proof of concept and atmosphere, but it's useless to you for detailing this arch. As the asset creator, you need to research and create a collage of other arches (google it, flickr, etc) to present elements for what you're going to do here. This will help you with your constructions and destruction because based on what you've made, this arch is made from a pile of gravel perfectly stacked then coated in stucco. Also having proper reference will fix that shape you made your arch at which wouldn't be able to support itself. Beyond that, your technical execution thus far is clean, and that's a good thing.
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