i never post....figured i would.

fritz

i never post....so i figured i'd post some old models while working on new ones. please feel free to crit away. thanks


Shot at 2008-11-25


Shot at 2008-11-25


Shot at 2008-11-25

shotgun

the concepts are seriously awesome. I don't think the poppy-ness is carried out as well as it could or should be in the 3D tho... maybe specular needs more love? anyhow really cool, finally I see you post after what... 10 years???

commander_keen

You should spend more time setting up lighting and rendering and get more contrast, but still dont let the shadows go to total black. The textures seem a bit bland and would stand out much better with some hue and brightness adjustments. The last one is by far the best.

El Scorcho

Those concepts are awesome! very bold. The models do look bland in compariso though. I think it's the lack of poses and like shotgun said, the specular could use some work. Cool work! do you have more to show?

JohnnyRaptor

Very nice dude! echoing what others already said, lighting, poses and composition and u should hit the concepts better! MOAR!

Rumkugel

my only suggestion:


post more

butt_sahib

hehe yeah. definitely. My kind of characters.
Who made those concepts? im thinking it's you. so excellent job on both ends

almighty_gir

too much blue. everyone uses blue neons =[

byder

Very cool indeed! Feathers look awesome, and the knees on the 3rd image look great, maybe a little to defined... but very nice!!!

cman2k

First chick lost some of the gold trimmings she had in her concept, I think those could add a lot to the 3d version. Those holsters of her strike me as really awkward too, If they must stay I think they'd do better to hang from the hip due to their bulkiness (wide guns is wiiiiiide).

Second chick needs those pointy nipples back like she had in the concept. Seriously who doesn't love those.

Bick-in-a-Dox

looks incredible

Spinks

nice work! I would really like to see these posed, i think that would add a lot of character

Bokaja

Excellent work - I agree on the specular and posing issue.
Otherwise I think you nail the models quite good

Love to see more!