Armoured Personnel Carrier

Ibi

Tris: 16,430 of goodness
APC Texture: 2048X1024, colour, normal, specular, emissive
Turret Texture: 1024X1024, colour, normal, specular
Wheel Texture: 512X512, colour, normal, specular





Would like some critique on this piece

SHEPEIRO

well its sweet but a little noisy (im not talking about the screen noise) probably the amount of parrellel lines crossing each other in the texture

renderhjs

I think the camera angles are a bit to extreme- there is no well balanced view at all in the shots. Most look like auto- tune magazine shots.
Maybe just some side views, top view and a typical front/side combination would be better to see the shape, design and overal balance of the model.

Textures are good but the yellow/black loops are outdated and a bit clich

Ibi

Thanks for the comments.. i think you're right about the views... I could add a nice front/side shot to show it off better.

Mark Dygert

looks pretty awesome.

The spec doesn't seem to be doing much, could be the lighting? Have you played around with spec color, it can help bring out the grudge/oily film metal sometimes gets.

Ibi

Hmm... maybe the spec needs brightening up a little... although I've been a little cautious with over doing the specularity, but I might play around with that. Thanks.

c0ldhands

The APC is nice, i just think that the backround should be less grungie because it doesnt make the APC stand out from the backround, I also took a look on your website...some cool stuff there, I liked the Ferrari 250 and the high poly building was just crazy! Keep it up!