he's looking a bit chunky for wolverine, Youre not doing a bad job, but i think you should check out os of Jim Lee's sketches of wolverine back in the 90's to get some better anatomy in there. I'll go ahead and link you to some images i can pull up:
yep, hes a bit plump to be the well-known wolverine. if you're trying to make your own interpretation then by all means interpret away. the typical logan is short, stocky, buff, ripped, and canadian.
practice on your anatomy first. most of the muscles are um... unnatural.
@indecom. its been awhile since I've collected comics, but I have all the ones you linked haha
hmmm, i would definitely check the anatomy, right now the pecs look a little too much like breasts. the should flow into the delts instead of having a deep crease. also the face looks a little cromagon, id gather a bunch of ref. Im by no means a character artist so take these as observations rather than hardcore crits.
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http://wolverine.x-knights.com/fullsize/wolverine47.jpg
http://groups.msn.com/artofjimlee/xmen.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=803
http://groups.msn.com/artofjimlee/xmen.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=192
having trouble finding more, but most of these will be in action poses being comics and all. should help out some though.
practice on your anatomy first. most of the muscles are um... unnatural.
@indecom. its been awhile since I've collected comics, but I have all the ones you linked haha