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Zephir62

Any tips before I color this baby?

killingpeople

i'd say new pose for left arm and to add a right wing

EggE

i'll say the left arm is hidden alitl bit too much with the wing in the background so I would rotate the wing up so you have a better silhouette. cant wait to see the finished product.

AsylumSeaker

The current pose looks a bit awkward due to so much weight being to the right of her body. I think the wing needs to be slightly more behind and above her.
I think it looks great with one wing. Why say add another wing? Its obviously been left this way for stylistic reasons, its not an accident or something.

Zephir62

not entirely happy with the way it came out. Any ideas on what to improve regarding the coloring?

Zephir62

different pose

Zephir62

Zephir62

a more Ghost in the Shell approach

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Zephir: what are you hoping to do in terms of end results?

Zephir62

These are just some test pieces to improve my drawing ability, so crit away

SHEPEIRO

i really like them, #the middle pose is abit odd though too thick around the waste and the neck seams shortened and too low forward

SHEPEIRO

i really like them, #the middle pose is abit odd though too thick around the waste and the neck seams shortened and too low forward also increasing the size of the head by roughly 110% seams to sort some other scale issues out



whoops weird double post, IE went loopy on me

Skinner3D

can't see a bloody thing