DWIII - 2D - thundercake - Penumbra

A. Prillaman

Penumbra is a void stalker, and she uses her twin claws to rip through the fabric of reality, or something. She can travel anywhere instantly by slipping into the shadow dimension.

This is my preliminary concept:



I think I'm going to add some more of the black fabric to her costume, maybe a cloak or some strips of fabric falling from her arms.

Arix

Love the style. Nice to see some contributing diversity in that respect. I'd love to see some more iterations on her, try some with a few ideas you have about the fabric and try some various silhouettes of the head-dress thing she has going on. Nice start

Uly

Really liking the style & proportions dood.

WickedFingers

Really strong start. I like her design and the stance she's posing but where's greentooth

A. Prillaman

I couldn't think of a good place to put the logo...any suggestions?

Davision3D

Very cool style, i would give her feet more thickness, they look almost paper flat.
Make a belt buckle with the logo or integrate it in the tattos.

kakikukeko

nice and strong style!
and a cool cute character you got there!
I wanna see this finished, gogogoo!

Jordtron

Hello university classmate! Strong start with a good concept I think. As for the logo integration, I'm thinking I'd have to agree with what has been suggested and say something with the tattoos. Maybe somehow incorporate the eyes of the smiley onto the chest, and the zig-zag of the teeth in the costume below the stomach? Make it glow green instead of blue, possibly? Just some ideas to kick around...

Cody

I agree with JOrdtron's suggestion about the tattoos, but it doesn't have to be green. Sticking with the blue would be fine, I think. Nice work.

Renaud Galand

oooh that's a fresh new style over here ! Really cool If you are looking for some additional inspiration, I'd advice you to take a look @ "Lock", a French comic book which has a similar style



Anyways, great style madame

r4ptur3

sweet style -- im sure you have thought of it already, but maybe logo as a tattoo?

Vitor

Fantastic entry so far. Very Twilight Princess style on that, which is a great thing

slosh

man, this looks great. cant wait to see more:) as for the logo, in your case i say a tattoo would work very well. uve already got those cool designs on her, just incorporate the logo into her designs somehow. i am going to do designs on the guy im workin on and have the logo amidst the designs in his armor. i was originally going to just plop it on a belt but it sticks out too much. if the logo matches the other elements on the character, it obviously fits a while lot better!

squidparty

needs more drips of nothingness!

christinavee

You know I dig her chaps, you have to keep those.
I also want more drips of nothingness, because we love drips of nothingness!

Slingshot

Nice!
Only Critique, She need shoes or different feet, they are too plain for my taste. but nothing to fancy.
I love the sleek yet simple graphic style of this character. Keep going!

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DOWIII Entry

A. Prillaman

Well I ran a little short on time... I wanted to do a lot of different things, even considered switching the body and design, but in the end I stuck with what I had originally planned. I managed to get the smiley in there, though...

Here's some crazy thumbnails I considered before designing what I already had:



and here's the modeling sheet:



here's the finished piece that I'll probably tweak later this week:

JesterBox

Glorious piece, I love how it is so different.