I think you should work more on the overall character proportions and silhouette before getting into specifics like the details on the head gear. Just my opinion.
Thank you for your comment, Ged. Actually i am quite satisfied with my silhouette on my first post. I don't have much time to play around with different ideas becuase of the time i have for this compettition is so little. I try to get the rough highpoly done by this weekend.
proportions are looking a bit weird especially the arms (my main focus here is top of the arms, shoulders, Bicep and triceps as it looks like you havnt got to the forearm as yet as well as the overall size in general) the rest of the model looks like your going for a realistic look but the current proportions sorta throw that out, one last crit is that you have modeled your character very straight up and down very stiff and no posture, you might want to put a bit more curves on her shoulders and backside
i suggest looking at some body reference sketches, photos ect, or even take a few photos of your girlfriend from the front and side just to help give u a bit of a better overall flow and shape to your character
Thank you, Massius. My job is mainly making environment for game never do character so I am a noob for character modeling. I have just bought a human anatomy for artist. I hope it help. i am still not sure how to do low poly for this character i am looking forward to some advices from verteran character people in this forum.
I took a day off hoping to get it done end up just finish her weapon and overall proportion adjustment. I still feel that her posture look stiff. I think i need to make her look more relaxing.
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kind of a mix of medium high and low
i suggest looking at some body reference sketches, photos ect, or even take a few photos of your girlfriend from the front and side just to help give u a bit of a better overall flow and shape to your character
I took a day off hoping to get it done end up just finish her weapon and overall proportion adjustment. I still feel that her posture look stiff. I think i need to make her look more relaxing.
Front view of it.