Head on the right is more interesting that the one on the central drawing.
I don't like the eye on his stomach ... don't really understand the utility ...
Demoniac hand could be really bigger than that to well understand he's a slave of this hand.
The marionette idea is an interesting one, but I think you could probably push theme theme a little more. It'd probably work better if you had a full set of strings (add one to the top of the head and one to each of the feet) and perhaps adapted a traditional marionette design for your character. Jack from The Plucker might be a good reference, though he's supposed to be a Jack-in-the-Box. http://www.theplucker.com/goodies.htm
Working a design like him into a more vicious looking warrior could work well I think.
of course i'll put strings on feet etc... my drawing on the right shows it, but the quality is too bad to see it correctly, i'll try to rescan it.i'm currently working on the head, i try some over stuffs like metalic claws nailed into his cheeks holdying the mask.
The paintball mask typed deal is pretty cliche. You might be better to go with something abit more interesting. How about a variant of a Zanni mask to go with the marionette theme?
If you do an image search for Zanni, you'll find a bunch of different variants.
I'm back with a full new concept, i was stuck on the last one so i tried something else. Maybe less original, but i like the idea. This is a invoquer with air/lightning power. the final scene will take place on a moutain surrounded by dark clouds.
what do you think of the posing ... a friend told me that he looks like he poos.
yeah that last sketch with the pose looks fly swatted to me. read about poses here and you can find out more about not making fly swatted poses in the lineart section
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Crystal guy is cool too.. . . but I'm not quite diggin the proportions or the overtly triangular shape of him.
I work know on number 5 and soon on 17. that's the 3 i like the much.
I have many ideas for him like extra spinal column out of is back with big sharp bones and tail(s). i'm still undecided on legs but i'm working on it
I don't like the eye on his stomach ... don't really understand the utility ...
Demoniac hand could be really bigger than that to well understand he's a slave of this hand.
http://www.theplucker.com/goodies.htm
Working a design like him into a more vicious looking warrior could work well I think.
If you do an image search for Zanni, you'll find a bunch of different variants.
what do you think of the posing ... a friend told me that he looks like he poos.
http://itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm
i'll post update during the week.
Time is running
Was my first contest, i'm pround and happy even if i would have more time and experience to do better, i'll be ready for the next war !