DWIII - 3D - Dante- Dementus praecox
Name: Dementus
Race: Human
Class Stalker / Warlord
Personality: Schizophrenic disorder (he's in a inner fight with his artifact)
Artifact: Old ancient wire that was a piece of the old machines. He uses it as a puppet master (read more in the story xD)
The little puppet mad of wire is representing his puppet master ability and he uses him as a bait for his enemies
Story: Dementus was a soldier, but as soon the Machines started up to awake again, some old wire of an old ancient strong machine caught dementus eye and he started to
hear a voice telling him to wrap this wire around his arm, to become the most powerful soldier. So he started to wrap the wire around him, but suddenly it took control
over him and started to wrap around his arm and face, he started to dislike it but he couldn't take it of, he lost control over his body and the so wire took over him.
It also got formed into a little puppet that is representing the old robot itself...
he started to kill anything what came near to him, friends family anybody. but dementus himself didn't gave up, so he became powerful enough to gather back control over his
wire body...
and now seeking for revenge, so he started to kill any robot or enemy that is coming into his way.
he also tries to find a way to get rid of the wire, so he started his quest to find the main ancient weapon that destroyed the robots his enemies, his wire or even himself before
he loses control again over his body....
Side note: He uses his little puppet as a bait and then he the wire wraps around his enemies and hes taking over control over them or he just stabs and strangles his enemies to death
Update: April 5th
Let's Rock and WAR!!!
xD
edit: hey guys,
i hoe u gonna be very critic, because i just started to study game art and I would like to improve as much as possible!!!
edit: i have just deletet my big story, its just tooooo long xD
Race: Human
Class Stalker / Warlord
Personality: Schizophrenic disorder (he's in a inner fight with his artifact)
Artifact: Old ancient wire that was a piece of the old machines. He uses it as a puppet master (read more in the story xD)
The little puppet mad of wire is representing his puppet master ability and he uses him as a bait for his enemies
Story: Dementus was a soldier, but as soon the Machines started up to awake again, some old wire of an old ancient strong machine caught dementus eye and he started to
hear a voice telling him to wrap this wire around his arm, to become the most powerful soldier. So he started to wrap the wire around him, but suddenly it took control
over him and started to wrap around his arm and face, he started to dislike it but he couldn't take it of, he lost control over his body and the so wire took over him.
It also got formed into a little puppet that is representing the old robot itself...
he started to kill anything what came near to him, friends family anybody. but dementus himself didn't gave up, so he became powerful enough to gather back control over his
wire body...
and now seeking for revenge, so he started to kill any robot or enemy that is coming into his way.
he also tries to find a way to get rid of the wire, so he started his quest to find the main ancient weapon that destroyed the robots his enemies, his wire or even himself before
he loses control again over his body....
Side note: He uses his little puppet as a bait and then he the wire wraps around his enemies and hes taking over control over them or he just stabs and strangles his enemies to death
Update: April 5th
Let's Rock and WAR!!!
xD
edit: hey guys,
i hoe u gonna be very critic, because i just started to study game art and I would like to improve as much as possible!!!
edit: i have just deletet my big story, its just tooooo long xD
Replies
stalker
dark/void user
charackteristics: schizophrenic psyco assassin with adiction to let stuff explode and a big collector of metalljunk like armor or other pieces
has little minions
artifakt: mask that represents greentooth, gives him stealth and crazyness
I like the thumb on the bottom right the best. More!! Less writing, more drawing!!!
hey guys please be very critical, I'm new here and I want to improve...
so I'm looking to your crits!
its looking crazy and mad....
cant wait to see whats coming
i like the bottom middle one, its very slasher meets mage
no i love to do rpg stories and play tabletopgames, so im cinda used to it to build up characktersheets and storys etc
but i think its better just to remove it, if people still like to read my rpg i can post it again or maybe do a link to my text or so...
but thanks for your comment richkid!!!
thanks for mentioning it richkid, have to get the movie as ref and look trhue if there is something inspirationaly to find...
Hey Dante,
I really like the selection of choices. Very mysterious and dangerous looking opponents indeed!
so pleaaase help me out guys
i was now to lazy to paint the polycount sign into my char :S, so please don't rip my head of
fist thing i see is the proportions make the legs longer!!
and maybe re size the spikes~~ otherwise not bad not bad~ its coming along~
I'm digging that little rat monster as a pet/artifact. If you make him look as bizarre and demented as the owner you are set for stardom!
I have made a little documentation (snapshots) how my design started to develop and I'm gonna post them right now... so please don't be to hard on me if i didn't posted all the time...
corrision and blackb , thx man for your reply!!!
corrison your comment actually let me started to think a lot about my character
First thing i did i fixed my proportions, thx blackb
and i started to draw a bad minion and it gave me my final idea about his artifact.
Its a dark void gauntlets which he can use to control anything what is able to move. its like a telekinesis gauntlets with magic wire thats gonna wrap around his enemies, so he can control them...
but then i saw somebody on polycount doing it already something like that :S so i screwed that
his new story: Dementus was a soldier, but as soon the Machines started up to awake again, some old wire of an old ancient strong machine caught dementus eye and he started to hear a voice telling him to wrap this wire around his arm, to become the most powerful soldier. So he started to wrap the wire around him, but suddenly it took control over him and started to wrap around his arm and face, he started to dislike it but he couldn't take it of, he lost control over his body and the so wire took over him. It also got formed into a little puppet that is representing the old robot itself...
he started to kill anything what came near to him, but dementus himself didn't gave up, so he became powerful and started to gather control over his wire body...
and now seeking for revenge he started to kill any robot or enemy that is coming into his way, he also tries to find a way to get rid of the wire, so he needs to find the main ancient weapon that destroyed the robots.
He uses his little puppet as a bait and then he the wire wraps around his enemies and hes taking over control over them or he just stabs and strangles his enemies to death
his head is gonna be the polycount face