Pilot character

tores

Some warmup for upcoming dominance war, need to get used to mudbox and highpoly modelling.

Basicly the gloves are meant to attach to diffrent devices, such as small hovercrafts, weapons and other vehicles. I also changed some stuff that's in the concept.

currently done with highpoly, could be a bit more details but I don't want to go crazy. lowpoly is 6200 tris and not uvmapped yet (only quick for test). I was thinking of 2 1024 maps, does that sound resonable?





Any critics welcome now before I go and do the final uvlayout and start texturing.

rooster

i think it looks great! my only crit is the cloth folds look a bit off to me

veteehrri

looking nice, agree about the folds.

Helixx

Nice model. Gonna have to agree with the others here and say that the folds of the sleeves and pants look a little too much like Cool Whip. Here's a quick sample of how the cloth would fold, mind you this is a flimsy fabric but the principle curves are the same, they just wouldn't be as loose. My only other crit would be that the waist band seems to be floating in mid-air.

tores

Thanks guys, and yeah I've been bugged about the folds, but I thought that it was good practise. I'll give it a second shot tho, and about the waistband floating in mid air, I just thought of that after I posted the image, so I'll change that tomorrow.

sama.van

If you want, look at this screens, this is Moira work's.
His personnal website is down since 2 years now, but you can find some of this work on my ftp ^_^.

This is maybe render you're looking for?...

http://sama.van.free.fr/moira.isp.st/10.jpg
http://sama.van.free.fr/moira.isp.st/110.jpg
http://sama.van.free.fr/moira.isp.st/19.jpg
http://sama.van.free.fr/moira.isp.st/3.jpg

tores

Thanks sama, moira have some nice folds there and the models are cool. But anyway, Here's an update lowpoly now at 6414 tris and uvmapped and baked normalmap. Made the folds a bit less sharp, I think they'r looking a bit better now. Need to fix hair and then move on to texturing, if you don't have any major critiques



Added backside

tores

Made some new boots as those before looked like crap. I think these will suit her much better.

tores

A small update, the lowpoly is done landed at 6680 tris without hair though.

Ryan Smith

tores awesome work. How bout a little bit of unsymmetrical details?

pliang

Some really awesome overall details there...I wish there was a visor on the helm itself though...its current design seems ot be lacking something to make it stand out.

Valandar

Maybe a slight alpha on the blue front part to make it slightly translucent, with the hint of an HUD superimposed on the inside?

tores

Well I don't think I'll finnish it before DW, but I got some practise in normalmapping so it's ok. Might finnish it after DW.

Valandar : yeah I was thinking of having a bit of alpha on it but good idea with the hud, just tested some, I'll change it later. I'll put the alpha on later because of mayas viewport sucks with alpha

Hair have a 512map, but I might change it to a 256 because it won't be seen much with the helmet on.

chip

In the latest version, given the apparent location of the shoulders, her neck looks waaaay too long.

The_Synj

Chip is right, she has a bad case of Giraffe Syndrome. Other then that, she seems okay..
Note: You may want to make her boobs a bit more apparent, i know that sounds horrible..but right now it's not too easy to tell that shes a female(besides her face). Her legs are a bit bulky, and her clothes are baggy, giving me the impression(when her helemet is on) that she is a man. I don't know if that is important to you or not, i guess that would depend on what you plan on using her for..

SHEPEIRO

i hate to say it at this point but i liked the stlyised sharpe folds you had earlier, if you had carried it through i think i would have prferred it. its still a nice peice though probably just me