Just a thought, but the toolbox will hamper his mobility or ability to use his weapon greatly.
Perhaps either a duffel on a sling, or a pistol rather than a rifle.
I like the concept. I love the pose as well. His gas mask looks like he's smiling I just would decide where to put pockets and patches because they seem just placed anywhere I would have put less looks kind of messy. Good character.
The hair and ears are really letting this piece down. His hair looks like shaving cream. This is a nice hair tutorial. As for the ear, I'd recommend getting some reference (not just from the side!) and redoing it.
Keep it up!
I think it needs some more detail in the hair. Some more fine lines, it still looks a bit clumpy. Good job on the ears. They look a lot better. Maybe a tad more detail in the eyebrow too. Fantastic facial expression. Ftw.
hay ok a lnice looking model just a few bit letting it down. the side berns dont look right they kined of sitick out from his face. have a look at some refernce images of side berns same goes for the hair and the eyebrows. but its looking good thow m8 keep it up.
his mouth seems almost the same as an insflatable doll , the eyes are also weird, like you cuted two holes and added some slight bevels around them. The face looks really muddy and i can see you are using lots of polygons but havent played with making the shapes be seen before the detail (wich are also almost inexistant ).
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Perhaps either a duffel on a sling, or a pistol rather than a rifle.
Interesting char none the less
Keep it up!
Odd.
Otherwise I love it, the vacant expression, etc
Good stuff
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