Way too many much small random details, and no interesting mid-level forms. You went way too highly sub-divided way too early and overall it looks like you had no real idea or goal you were working towards with this guy.
What sort of criticism are you hoping to get from this? You've added smaller impractical details before refining your base mesh without any clear direction of what you want to achieve. Get an idea of what you want to create, and then work in steps from large to small details.
Hey killaball, looks scary! I agree with EQ, it looks like a totally random sketch, like you didn't know what you were going to do next - 'add a swirl here, add some dots there...' Know what I mean? And yeah, because there's no interesting mid level forms, it just looks fairly flat, aside from what is fairly small surface detail. If you wanted to make this look more skeletal, I'd say you need to use a different basemesh, or just go more extreme with cutting out some flesh. Mhuaa mhuaa mhuaa!
-he is a 3 feet tall (trap)souvenir figure highpoly normalmapped ingame prop, sold by some ninja(not obvious at the first moment) monks with a diamond on his chest & packed full of explosives for the next .... title
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-create a idea out of him, give him a purpose as a character, relate him to his enviroment where he may live in,... and use "refere-nce". "refere" him or anything on him to something that exists. right now his story looks like: basemesh/mudbox/subdivide&doodle for a 3d artist; any other one -> 3d object/slightly monsterlike
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my ideas for putting him into a good light:
-he is a 3 feet tall (trap)souvenir figure highpoly normalmapped ingame prop, sold by some ninja(not obvious at the first moment) monks with a diamond on his chest & packed full of explosives for the next .... title
or
-create a idea out of him, give him a purpose as a character, relate him to his enviroment where he may live in,... and use "refere-nce". "refere" him or anything on him to something that exists. right now his story looks like: basemesh/mudbox/subdivide&doodle for a 3d artist; any other one -> 3d object/slightly monsterlike