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danpants polycounter lvl 14
Just put up my site again. I had 2 days so I tore it apart and remade it. http://www.danpants.com/index.html

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  • bounchfx
    hey.

    couple things.

    your top bar thing (how come I can't remember what those things are called?) has very pixelated type. annoying on the eyes.. at least in my opinion.

    there's absolutely nothing on the first page except for the news and top bar thing.. should definitely put some artwork right up in front.

    also, the 3d page.. what's the point of 'Antenna' and 'Cable', etc. why not just small medium large since it seems to be the same rotation in three different sizes.

    Also.. the 2d page is missing content. most likely because you didn't put anything yet, but I'm not sure since there is an image there.. just not clickable. and it looks like the silhouette is missing feet.

    the about page is missing your top bar.

    fix em up! smile.gif
  • cholden
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    cholden polycounter lvl 18

    To be fair, this site is in shambles.

    Home page with no purpose, one unfinished character on 3d page, a blurry silhouette on the 2d page, email address on contact page, and an about page that breaks format (no header/footer) that basically tells us nothing new because we already know your name and that you make characters.

    I'd put the web site on backburner until you have some complete characters for presentation and a well written resume.
  • pliang
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    pliang polycounter lvl 17
    I would say just put the art work on there...the unfinished work shouldn't be put on there if it does not have much to show and since the 2d has only one image might as well discard it.

    If I was looking through this and that I'd rather look somewhere else.

    Btw those images are a bit tiny.

    And instead of about me...a resume which is missing will tell us a lot more then just that. You can probably write a cover letter with that on instead.

    Definitely get on that.
  • Xena
    Hi Dan.

    where are the rest of models that you made? I always remeber the lyrics "You've got to work with you have..."

    Good luck!
  • danpants
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    danpants polycounter lvl 14
    Thanks for all the advice. Yeah I am going to change it and fix it and put more models up. I am going to add more stuff soon. Its hard to trying to learn so much information at once. Hey Min, yeah I am texturing them as we speak. Trying to get the texture maps correct. Modeling,Sculpting,Texturing,Rendering. so much stuff. smile.gif
  • Xena
    Yeah, I know. bro.Since we don't have shipped title yet, better work harder than the pros.
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