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John Warner polycounter lvl 18
I'm getting about ready to call this done. please don't hesitate to post feedback wink.gif

http://www.thejohnwarnerexperience.com

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  • Uly
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    Uly polycounter lvl 17
    First thing that caught my eye was bad spelling! >: (

    haha no big whoop, but fix these errors. They've been corrected, and made bold. The little english teacher in your head would be very disappointed.

    "This shot is from my VFS grad reel. The model is a remake of a toy set by McFarlane Toys, reference here. (CAPITALIZATIONS)The footage was tracked in Boujou, the digital elements were rendered in XSI, and the compositing was done in After Effects."

    "This is a model that I did at the beginning of Company of Heroes: Opposing Fronts. Unfortunately, we didn't have a concept artist until a few months into the project. (RUN ON SENTENCE!!!) As soon as we got one, this fellow got redone. C'est La Vie.

    The hands aren't mine."

    Misspelling only works for that cheese-eater, b1ll.

    The artwork itself is pretty solid! OpFro guy is a good piece, though his face and variations could use some tweaks. They're somewhere on the edge of the uncanny valley. I love Monolith Head. Finish him.
  • John Warner
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    John Warner polycounter lvl 18
    that's extremely helpful. thanks very much! I always forget to spell check.
  • J Randall
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    J Randall polycounter lvl 15
    why is the thumbnails focused to the upper torso? maybe a note that it opens to quicktime, my two cents on my research of demo sites would be to add jpeg images with your contact information on them. I really like the bridge and the gravestone, your environmental objects are strong.
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