Do you have restrictions for the poly budget? If you can use some more polies, I'd suggest you make the seat of that couch more round, because it doesn't look very comfortable. It's also not clear how the side parts support the main structure, perhaps you need to add another metal part? Your scale seems off too - the ceiling looks too low. You should import a character model and use it as a measure to make sure you got the scale right. As for windows, it would make sense to extrude them in to add some depth, now they look more like black pieces of wallpaper. The wood texture on the walls seems large and very low res.
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this looks very 1991 , i guess you should adress foggman comments, and besides making bettr lightning please make the modeling better , right now its even worse than those first tries with 3ds max back in the days
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let me know what you guys think, thank you for looking