Bringing it to life - rhinokio

Rhinokey

picked this by Kasimir Malevich

here is a wip wireframe

and a work in prog render

a lot of time was spent on all the subtle nuances in this piece.. i hope you respect and chose me winner!

cochtl

That's incredible. The essence captured by your computer imagery is astounding. There is so much heart and emotion that is oh so exquisitely portrayed. I see nothing but fine craftsmanship and guile along with a keen eye and a sense of appreciation for the minor details that is presented so eloquently in this image.

Bravo sir. Bravo!

Joshua Stubbles

Dude, the sphere has jaggies..... MAKE IT 9,998 TRIANGLES DAMNIT!

Spacey

My two cents:

- The main form needs to be pushed away from the edges a smidge. Setting up a perspective grid will help get it just right. Do a Google search for tutorials on how to do that.

- Add some blue hue to the background color. Without it, the mood doesn't quite have the pizzaz of the orginal.

Great job! You're really close to capturing it perfectly!

MAUL0r

you know, a simple textured plane would... oh never mind. great job! and stuff.

jaalto

Total coolness! Any chance to see those awesome texture maps?

Wells

wtf, looks nothing like it.

indian_boy

i agree with sectuars... wheres the grey border? and the white? and what about the black text u ommited thats right at the bottom? better fix those up quick, or u won't win this one!

Joao Sapiro

needs tits, how i have no idea, but FAST !

Emil Mujanovic

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Best crit in this thread!

-caseyjones

Prs-Phil

that would have actually taken longer

Rhinokey

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i agree with sectuars... wheres the grey border? and the white? and what about the black text u ommited thats right at the bottom? better fix those up quick, or u won't win this one!

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white borders and text aint part of the actual art u dummy

indian_boy

yes i knew that. seriously speaking... i DID know that.

i just thought i'd continue the retardeness just for the heck of it though. !

anyways, brilliant work! just make sure u check for 100% accuracy before u submit!
cheers!

Zwebbie

Y'know, if you'd make the black thing a round plane, you could have 9998 sides on that (since two are used for the blue thing). That's, liek, very round-ish.

IronHawk

omg! sooooo not worthy! /bow x3

EarthQuake

shit sucks, optimise that mesh noob.