Gun Girl wip

Slipstream

I think I need help seeing what I need to do to improve this character. Actually, I know need help =P
This is for a client, and I've gotten some awesome critique's in the "what you're working on thread" but I'd really like to learn a helluva a lot more with texturing on this, and make it portfolio ready. So please, tear it apart.

Entirely diffuse mapped, with 100% self illumination

Carl Brannstrom

She looks very masculine in the front view. Especially in the pelvic area.

Huge nuts

indian_boy

shading from the front view suggests a..... lump in her crotch area. i think that's what corv is also pointing out?

Slipstream

Ah I see what you're both talking about. Thanks!