Valkyrie Profile Frie

merlyn

This was made for a Valkyrie Profile contest at www.gamingartist.com (My final submission renders(may provide larger images at a later point)). This character is called Frie i believe but she seems to be called a different name wherever i look. I plan on working on her again so crits and comments would be appreciated. She is 1300 tris and uses a 1024 x 1024 res diffuse and alpha maps. Here is the concept.

bounchfx

looks great, only part that bugs me is the face.. mainly lips and eyebrows.. the eyes seem to be rotated wrong as well.

other than that it looks awesome

technodookie

Great work! I'd have to agree the eyebrows could be a scotch longer and look less like their tattooed on.

Ramj

I think the eyes should be further apart, not even looking at the concept they look too close together, then when you do look at the concept, they're more extreme.

JKMakowka

I would also tweak her proportions a bit to make her look less child like (the concept is a bit childlike, but your model is even more so).

merlyn

Thanks everyone, i am keeping this all in account, i don't have time to work on her atm, but once i finnish my Spartan Warrior hopefully i will get some free time to address the areas mentioned, keep the comments coming they are greatly appreciated.