1st post -another soldier

meepmeep

hey guys, been lurking around this forums for awhile, and mustered up the courage to post something, this still req alot of polishing before the end of my school term so please leave c&c thanks

sorry if the pics are huge

Joshua Stubbles

bad meepmeep, bad!

*slaps your wrist*

Imageshack provides thumbnail links as well - use them!

Other than that, solid work! It all looks pretty damn slick to me.

Ghostscape

HUEG PICS ARE PICS TAT ARE HUEG

Actually I'm a fan of huge pics but I'm in a minority.

I'm really digging the third picture of the dude in the armor but with the way you have the armor modelled when you smooth it it's going to shrink weirdly and turn to shit. I'm assuming you're going to chamfer the appropriate edges later?

pliang

Agreed, it timed out on me btw adding on

Mongrelman

Very cool.

I know he's wearing armour on his forearms, but you might want to give more definition between the hand and wrist. At the moment they just flow together a bit too smoothly

aesir

kickass work. Looking forward to seeing some nice polished fancy renders when you finish em up. maybe some turnarounds too.

Rwolf

Nice stuff you got going.

hobodactyl

Very nice! I like the designs

Emil Mujanovic

Very nice sculpting dude, and awesome first post.
Thumbnails!

-caseyjones

EricElwell

very nice!

Japhir

looks great! only crit would be that the tail seems as if it is just glued on, and not part of the character look up some anatomy reference of dogs/cats/mice/monkeys/any creature with a spine and tail. hope it helps!
awesome first post!

LoTekK

Holy shit, best first post ever. Also biggest first post ever.

Love that diorama, especially with the alien guy jumping in. Death from above! Really really nice work on that armor, too.

meepmeep

thanks guys for taking the time to comment and looking at my thread, i agree with all of the crits and i hope to fix everything and have renders kicking before my time here is done

Jeremy Lindstrom

Just remember as stated above, the tail looks glued on because tails are extensions of the spine. Thats what makes them look glued on, it needs to flow as a part of the spine.

killingpeople

these are sweet looking. keep us updated.

ghost-d

great models, man...