female anime character base mesh (nsfw)

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I was bored and knocked this up on and off for months


4300 trianglesish. 27-ish.

The breasts are shaped like that so they could easily be reshaped. Same for the way less defined abdomen detail.

It is already fully uvmapped for 1024x1024 (that doesn't mean the model is done though. live pelt map pins ftw) and yes, I have already abused it for special purposes (though ignore the hair and pose, was merely material testing fun)

I plant o release this mesh as an obj soon after some niggles are stomped. Then everyone can go kawaii and start turning japanese and shit lol.

Davision3D

Great!
Maybe her boobs and ass should hang down a bit.
Seriously, really looks like a perfect shaped anime girl.

An SDK would be very cool.

JKMakowka

Her lower backside really needs to be improved. I mean just look at where the "ass-crack" starts

The feet could also be improved, and that face gives me the creeps right now

But overall it really isn't bad at all.

zenarion

The butt is the human bodies biggest single muscle. The muscles itselves are actually attached to the legs, so there is no "line" between leg and butt. Even that out.
Also her jaw is so small, even for an anime girl. But that is hardly an issue.
Is this gonna be Hsi En Ko? :>

pliang

I see no hint of spine in the back...maybe because it's anime?

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Her lower backside really needs to be improved. I mean just look at where the "ass-crack" starts

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my bad, the ass doesn't 'crack' that high really, it's the funny goraud shading

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there is no "line" between leg and butt.

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in anime there is and it's very obvious, especially in drawings.

man this thread is going to be 'fun' excusing out realistic anatomy crits :P
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Is this gonna be Hsi En Ko? :>

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no

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I see no hint of spine in the back...maybe because it's anime?

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if you mean the bone then none of that's there, but as for the spinal arch it's very much there

zenarion

About the line between thigh and butt, that happens on real people when the leg is bent backwards. Standing up straight does not produce one, not on skinny girls at least. Anyway, i guess you are going to put pants or a skirt on her, so that will not be seen.

conte

background for opacity?
model does look ok, just eyes a bit annoying, keep working.

warby

i was totally gonna flame you for the entire face but than i saw that water render and the silhouette of the face is ANIME SPOT ON ... so good work i guess

John Warner

wow cheap, you're getting good. i think the ass could be a bit more round. her proportions in general don't flow into each other as well as they could. this is giving her a kind of bizzare sex-doll feel.. as if perhaps each section is appealing, but maybe she's got a body of broken bones or something.. the feet need work.

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Oops, I just realized I only posted the smooth shaded picture up. Post edited with flat shade.

Josh_Singh

why you blur out the pachina? I want to crit that too.

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For less questions and arguing, "ugh attention" and the funny fact japan laws need genitalia censored no matter what . For curiosity, here it is (though be warned it is intentionally open, for skinning purposes. I don't want a derailed thread on 'morality' about including this, it's a base mesh and I'd like it to be complete, thanks)

textured

Though i'd like more crits on the legs and feet though, i didn't spend much time on those and I can't find what's exactly wrong about them.

HonkyPunch

Cheapy likes anime women with pale skin and dark hair.
As well as gargoyles.

Bitchin'

pyromania

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Though i'd like more crits on the legs and feet though, i didn't spend much time on those and I can't find what's exactly wrong about them.

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If you move the ankle bone down and forward and pull the heel back slightly. It won't look like all the weight is resting on the back of the foot.

Also the butt should look like a upside down heart.

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Thanks. I've adjusted the feet and the butt as well as doing some UV mapping tweaks (back was too huge). I'm in the texturing phase now

The hair is a placeholder, because hair makes things pop out so much better.

(click for hi-res pic)

Toomas

The eyes are too far apart and maybe too deep in her skull for anime character.
The ribcage under the bewbs is kinda off too i think either that or the upper stomach muscles are wrong.
Also i would recheck the elbow area.

But other than that it seems like a really solid mesh so far and the texture is turning out nice aswell.

EarthQuake

are you going to make the gargoyle fuck it?

CheapAlert

what? I haven't done one since 2005

Needles

Her butt hangs too high on the side view.

Moar like this!



I think the bottom one is nearly perfect for that body type you're going for.

shardy

solid mesh/texture, but DAMN has she been f*cked by a train or something?

Joseph Silverman

Eyes seem way too far apart, even for anime.

JKMakowka

Cover her private parts with cute little octopus sidekicks and put her in OpenArena

Dread_Reaper

God those eyes are scary.

My one crit is that her legs seem a tad bit long, even for anime purposes. I would propose simply moving her entire hip region down a little big more, because right now she has the impression of having a metal rod up her ass. Perhaps her arms are too short, and its not the hips at all...

By the way, the pixelated crotch is hilarious.

-Dread_Reaper