Dominance War II- alexisys

alexisys

Hi guys
I finally decided to post, still don't know can I finish it in time or not, but I'll try, cos I want to be on war very much. That's my earlier concept, I've changed a lot while modelling...Today I'm gonna finish low poly, and post it tommorow..Her name is Ariel I repaint the concept later..

Cridder

Cool idea, good luck on the races towards the finish line

rollin

welcome!

she´s playing psp??

looks nice.. cool stile, looking forward seeing more

alexisys

Thank you guys
I feel more optimistically right now..
Yeah, It's psp, I think it's good to play your favourite games after hard fighting day on WAR, and renovate your forces for the next battle
...
Next week gonna be the hardest week which I ever had,
so GOOD LUCK to everybody

EricElwell

get crackin!

alexisys

As promissed my low poly model..Tommorow will start making hi poly. Realy tired, go to sleep...

Psyk0

Great model, now show the high poly sweetness .

alexisys

I'm alive, I just finished and uploaded my pictures, thumbnail didnt change but I think it's ok. I hope you guys like it! Didnt sleep couple days, so glad that I finsh...:)Dying how I want to sleep..

Marisa

Try to get some alpha's in that hair.

fogmann

That turned out really cool! If you didn't submit the piece yet, here are a few small crits (and if you did, I hope you go back and address these eventually). Aside from what Marisa said, I'd suggest that maybe tweak her lips shape a bit and make her face look more womanly. Not sure exactly what it is, maybe lips, maybe nose, or both, but she looks like beautiful prince from a fairytale, to which contributes the fact that her booby shapes are barely recognizable behind that jacket. Also, try to fix the sharp seam between hair and forehead by painting some hair onto the forehead (just subtly, with lower opacity), because the hair looks detached, as if it's a hat. Some stronger specular highlights on the shinier parts would also be nice to have.

Anyways, good luck, this is really looking great, I especially like the pants and boots!

alexisys

Thank you for the crits guys, but I posted it yesterday, and now I'm very sad, that everything looks exactly not like it should be, and too late make changes. When I've been finishing rigging, on the website(dominance war) it was showing like I have an hour to the deadline. That differents with Russian time...mixed up everything.
I just totally forgot about alphas for the hair, when I noticed that, I already posted images
With nose and lips it's kind of weird, they looks different in the viewport on different angles..maybe cos I changed their shapes in the hi res model, and normals turned out wrong, or I painted like that. I painted hairs on the seam between forhead and hairs, but not too much I think, cos they are not viewable.

It's so pity that I started so late, and missed some details in her look. Now I understand what means feedback and critics... It's my first challenge, I will be smarter next time


Image without metal jacket

rollin

nice

jie you always miss some stuff even if you look at it the whole day.. or lets say.. because !

and i love the boots.. soo cool..

AND i want such a beltbuckle!!!!

daghen

this is cool character ..and you can upgrade her after the challenge is finished..

Dread_Reaper

Motion seconded. This is a great piece for an entry, but I think it could be cleaned up alot. At this point it looks VERY busy, which is in itself not a bad thing, but this seems busy to the point of distracting people from your excellent skillz. Other than that, I think you've got a real sweet piece here, and she shall bring glory to polycount!

-Dread_Reaper

alexisys

Hope so

Ged

very cool but all the flat bright colours in the texture are a bit grinding. A few well chosen colour variations would be enough I think.

Xaltar

The lips are a bit too low down and the top lip could be a bit fuller. Otherwise the model looks good.