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Dominance War II - AdamBrome.. FINISHED!

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  • Fuse
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    Fuse polycounter lvl 18
    Hey, i am really liking this one. I think you have a lot of subtlety here.

    I do think however that the lighting could be more intense, a lot of your scene is getting too lost in the shadows.
  • Jay Evans
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    Jay Evans polycounter lvl 18
    nice one. Good job on the normal mappery:P If I had one crit it would be the low poly rocks in the bottom left corner:) Wasn't that a crit on your last enviro? Hide those things or even better give them a little bevel action:)

    The redish plants in the foreground could probably pick up a bit more of that yellowish light, looks like they might have a bit of baked in lighting on them that dosen't quite match.

    Overall I think the composition is ace.
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 20
    Finished!
    domwar2_stage01.jpg
    domwar2_stage02.jpg

    Wires later..
  • Wells
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    Wells polycounter lvl 18
    Looks pretty badass... maybe a little 'soft' for the grim future painted in the briefs.

    so who's the lucky bastard who gets to stand on this display? or do all polycounters get it smile.gif
  • Joao Sapiro
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    Joao Sapiro sublime tool
    looks nice man ! mind we seeing a viewport capture ?
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 20
    Sectaurs: The idea was to sell the character as an infiltrator and to support her companions jungle buddy (gorilla). The stage was originally for ghost_rider but now its just a portfolio piece. Thanks :P

    Johny: Thank man. And here yah go:
    domwar2_editor1.jpg
    domwar2_editor2.jpg
  • spacemonkey
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    spacemonkey polycounter lvl 18
    this piece looks good from a distance, definately doesnt help the characters - but I know its your environment pimp smile.gif
    would have been nice to some some creepers on the wall and maybe a little more foliage (sp?)
  • adam
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    adam polycounter lvl 20
    Hey thanks spacemonkey. Someone at CGCHAT made the same comment about the lack of character focus, which I agree 100% on. I'll repost what I wrote for them as it applies here:

    These shots are for my portfolio so I've put the focus in these shots strictly on the environment. Josh is unable to finish the contest so I decided to focus the final shots on the environment.

    The plan was definitely to have this focus on her, as thats what this contest is about and the entry renders would have shown that. I should have mentioned that these shots are for my portfolio to show off the stage itself.

    Thanks again!
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