Dominance war II - diZzyWalnut

diZzyWalnut

Hi,
since so long time I'm here at polycount and I never participate in any concours.
This is my first one so I start with a poem :

Dizzy, dizzy ...,
...it won't be so easy.

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Here's my first idea.

Davision3D

Your poem sucks but your concept could lead to something very good. Right now its very blury...use a simple sharp brush!
The creatures head reminds me a bit of the evil aliens in the fifth element. You should put more of that alien look in other parts of you char and makeing thumbs to get an innovative idea for it is always good.

Shady-D

lol.. beats my first post i think.
but yeah, its pretty blurry... he has some cool shapes though but looks a bit generic?

Ramucho

As the other said the concept looks a little blurry, get some hard brush and polish it.
As for the generic look try to give him a more interesting silhouette.

GO FRENCHY GO!!

diZzyWalnut

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Your poem sucks but your concept could lead to something very good. Right now its very blury...use a simple sharp brush!
The creatures head reminds me a bit of the evil aliens in the fifth element. You should put more of that alien look in other parts of you char and makeing thumbs to get an innovative idea for it is always good.

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I see that my poem has a success , so I've wroten another one specialy for You Davision3D :

Easy , easy ...
Fuck !
... not for You , dizzy.

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And now seriously , thank You all for Your comments.
Crits and suggestion are always welcome.



Here's mine a middle human, a middle evil.

diZzyWalnut

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diZzyWalnut

little up date -

Michael Knubben

Easy and dizzy rhyming? Could you be any *more french?

If i were you i'd spend some more time concepting, i think you could come up with a more unique design.

diZzyWalnut

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Easy and dizzy rhyming? Could you be any *more french?

If i were you i'd spend some more time concepting, i think you could come up with a more unique design.

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what have I to say ....?
I'm a czech living in France ,
so I do my best in a french and english language.

And for the design ; You're right man and I hope that a next Year I will bring something more interesting for You and Polycount familly.

While ; I will do what I'm able to do even if it's not enough for this competition and "PRO" level.

Thanks

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All night I've spent to watch some video to learne a little bit ZBRUSH , .... ophhh here's mine first "ZBRUSHING" :

daghen

keep going dizzy and do the best you can ..but keep have fun

Michael Knubben

Hey, i hope i didn't rub you the wrong way with that comment. I just meant that dizzy and easy rhyme a lot more when said with a french accent

diZzyWalnut

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Hey, i hope i didn't rub you the wrong way with that comment. I just meant that dizzy and easy rhyme a lot more when said with a french accent

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...little bit.
You know there's days that I'm tired after my job and I can take some comments a wrong way. It was this case.
Be sure that otherwise I'm cool.

Xaltar

Love the cocept drawing dude, awesome. Hey, try out mudbox, I got the trial today and so far its way easier to use than Zbrush and its also got cooler options

Your model looks promising, concentrate on your body first, get your anatomy down and then accesorise. Keep at it