Dominance War II - Fjornsvavne

Fjornsvavne

After quite some time of tries of making something up, I'm finally on a track that I'd like to continue on. So now up for some critting! (notice that I did not reserve a spot in advance xD)
Here's those that brought me to where I am now, last one showing more of what I want.

PeterK

I think you should concentrate on taking this theme a bit further. He seems very generic right now. his weapons should be a bit more functional.