Dominance War II - Issie & Ghost

Ghost

Time for WAR (and concept). The pictures WIP .
Our concept-artist is Reine Roseberg (reine.rosenberg@comhem.se)

First outcast is this. We still haven´t got him any kinda weapon yet.

anton980

I like! Nice drawing, kudos to Reine! Boots seems too large, to me it throws proportions off.

struve

Looks like a strogg with big ass boots. But i like it
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Issie

Here is the coloured version.

indian_boy

thanks, struve, for reminding me the name!
STROGG!
it does look like one, mainly cuz of the mask (i think). but its real cool... so u don't really need to change it...

Joao Sapiro

the boots could be slightly less massive ?

Issie

It for kicking the CGchats ass........ =P or just to beat up my boyfriends ass =D

Davision3D

Very good concept
I personally like the big boots but i think you should make some other parts bigger to, like a big shoulder plate and big hands/gloves.

Emil Mujanovic

Fuck I love chunky boots!
Great concept, though its looking really plain from the waist down to the knees and the weakest areas at the moment are the wrist guards and the head. Something about them just seem a let down in comparison to what's happening on the chest armour and the sleek boots.
Great stuff all the same.

-caseyjones

Issie

I will notify our concept-artist about your tips..
More critics would be nice

ivars

Nice concept you've got there. Like mentioned before, he could definitely go with one more super sized feature.

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It for kicking the CGchats ass........ =P or just to beat up my boyfriends ass =D

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You will need bigger boots

Issie

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Nice concept you've got there. Like mentioned before, he could definitely go with one more super sized feature.

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It for kicking the CGchats ass........ =P or just to beat up my boyfriends ass =D

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You will need bigger boots

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Then I will wear transformers-boots with spike on it to kick your ass (that I like very much) but now it is wartime so........

Here is the new update.

Issie

More!!

daghen

like this guy ...maybe a big weapon on shoulder for more destruction..

Squirrelsquid

I realy like the design,the boots are very cool! But his Head/face guard does remind me Astaroth
from Soul Calibur a bit "too" much.

keep it up!

richkid

you have all kinds of stuff going on in the textures of the armor, lets see something to break apart the silouette. maybe some pipes or canisters, seems too sleak to me.

over all he is fun

Issie

The weapon design

anton980

I'd make his weapon bulkier - your warrior is so huge, he dwarfs that stick.

Issie

The new improved version.........
The Staff or Lance has the same height or longer the charater..

zudchu

Neat concept, I do agree with richkid though.

The new version of the weapon is much better I think, looks really good.

Issie

I just had to have some fun with Lanster
So I gave him Speedos (or boxers).



But Just for fun...
WIP

TheWinterLord

Great, I always wanted to know what kind of underwear he had... Good progress girls!

Rhinokey

you don't seem to be following the concept verry close on the armor, some of the detail looks like "oh theres some square polys here i can extrude straight out to make some detail!" i used to do that myself when i was newer to modeling,, don't make easy modeling sacrifices, follow that rather nice concept closely

also on the concept the mask on the face looks to go almost straight down into the chest, where you would not see much of the neck at all,

Issie

Thanks for noticing but I got a different kinda front and side view picture from our conceptartist.
That is why the modell looks diffrent.

W1r3d

The last verion of that weapon is very similiar to the alien weapon used in Unreal 2 - The Awakening. Like that design ^_^

I also think that for the character you should revert more to the original concept.

Issie

I am sorry that I did not update for a long time but I am done with my model for my schoolproject and I am done with the basics for Lanster.

Jaco

The forearms look tiny, and his proportions remind me of a midget. It also doesn't look like you've followed the concept that closely. The colour of the armour should also be a bit darker, it looks white not silver at the moment.
You've got a pretty cool concept, and my best advice would be to just follow it more closely. The concept has some nice proportions, but the proportions of the model are a bit off. The entire body seems too wide, and the forearms look pretty weak compared to those in the concept.
I hope that I didn't sound too harsh, just trying to help Keep it up!

Issie

It ok, this modell was only for the schoolproject, I have to work on this a bit more, but this time I will follow the concept as I supposed too.