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Dominance War II - Shady-D

Shady-D
polycounter lvl 17
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Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
im not the most creative soul to be found on these here boards.. but here is Bob =)
Basicly a futuristic Green Baret, with a wee bit of gadgets on his face. The eyeglass thingy which connects to his ear, enables him to receive mission briefing as well as increase his hearing, the glass can zoom in and has a crosshair, so it sports accuracy. The metal mask thing can adjust his voice volume as well as adjust his smelling sense
Im gonna give him GoW-ish proportions.. bulkyness!

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  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    Born in the midst of the Polycount empire's glory.
    He was only 7 years old when he witnessed his father and mother getting murdered by CGChatters. He swore revenge against his parents' assassinators. He spend 21 years of his life training, honing his skillz. At the age of 25 he was known as the most vicious assassin on the planet Poly.
    Now, a second war is arising. This patriotic super soldier is not letting this chance go by to search for the assassins for parents and defend his motherland.
    FTW o/ RHAAAAAAAAa
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    anyone got a name suggestion for him?

    basic description of his suit:
    neck is surrounded in a cushion so that it will be hard to just cut his neck.

    shoulderpads, cuz they look cool.. same goes for the chestplates and abplates.

    His right arm is covered in bandage rather than armor, this does not offer allot of protection however, this is his gun wielding hand, his index, thumb and middle finger tops are uncovered so he can easily use that hand for practical stuff (unzipping stuff/feel stuff/Pick nose)

    His left arm on the other hand has a fore-arm protector that he uses as a shield in close combat.

    His utility belt has a few mystery pockets, a gun (drawing that later) and a cyber uber ninja sword.

    The thighpads protect his tighs.. seeing as a hit there could paralyze his leg.

    Your casual camo, medium baggy, pants.

    segmented boots for flexibilty but for a hard kick in yo ass.

    He has a slim yet muscular figure which fools many into thinking he is slow and sluggish.
  • gauss
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    gauss polycounter lvl 18
    hi, Bob! glad you've got so much content up, that's the only way you're going to get any replies, after all smile.gif
    it's good to work up an interesting story and details for your character... but without those explanations, how well does the character design stand up by itself?
    take away your descriptions, and you've got a pretty generic looking big-armor type guy, completely interchangeable with a character from Unreal Tournament, or Q3, or any number of other games. that's not going to be winning you any contests, now is it? smile.gif
    dont go with the obvious choice when you're designing specific elements. whether it's the eyepiece, the armor, the gun, the whatever--whatever you draw first you should probably not use. why? because it's probably just you, regurgitating a design you've already seen. and like you describe your guy as sort of like GoW, why would i want to look at your guy if the same guy has already been designed, but better? take some time to sketch--lay off of your storymaking and detail stuff, all that can come later--right now you need to come up with interesting details on a visual level. try to come up with shapes, with surfaces, with tech details that you haven't already seen before. it'll end up being more fun for you and a whole lot more fun for people looking at your art.
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    you just totally read me.. Nothing on that concept is really original.
    XD.. my name isn't bob, its my characters name..
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    Goenigoegoe
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    acid spraying nipples!
  • richkid
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    richkid polycounter lvl 18
    hey, thats my idea and you cant have it, only one octaped per battle...i might the acid nipples
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    lolz.. as long as you lead Polycount to victory with your eightlegged freak ;P.. BURNING ACID NIPPLES! Thumbstime
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    Help me pick! The Clock is burnin'!
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    more doodles!
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    Some thoughts would be nice.. i wanna start modeling this weekend but concepting isn't my strong side.. and i dont know anyone who would want to concept for me =(
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    Okay i got something I like.
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    he's a ninja/archer/stealthy
    Plan on giving him some tribal metal armor

    Some replies would be nice =/
  • Unbreakable
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    Unbreakable polycounter lvl 17
    Be sure to get some photoref of someone would has the basic porportions that you want. Also get plenty of ref of lizards. smile.gif
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    Thanks, will do!
    I got a pose i like and that fits him.
    He is a fast in-out guy.. prolly like a ninja.
    Meh gotta think of how to armor him
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  • Japhir
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    Japhir polycounter lvl 17
    great improvements with the pose!
  • Psyk0
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    Psyk0 polycounter lvl 18
    Much better. To me he looks more like a fantasy character than a sci-fi year 3000 alien, so go nuts with the armor.
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    lol yeah.. this is where the creative part is supposed to kick in.. Thanks for the replies =)

    Im thinking of metal/bone armor a la HR Giger
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
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    or maybe not =/.. lol
    His melee weapon is something similiar to brass knuckles except for its a poisoned blade. Poison coming straight outta his mouth =P..
    heh.. i thought the right fore-arm protector could double as a slingshot XD.. but thats silly
    The wings are artificial, i want to keep him clean because he is more of an "Swoof-what-was-that?!" guy rather than "CHAARGE!!" guy.
  • Shady-D
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    Shady-D polycounter lvl 17
    now if only i could draw better.. its supposed to have a cyborg-like head.. =/
    improving is sight/smell/hearing
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