It does need more shadow. As well as more definition in some parts.
The teeth bother me a great deal, because they just sort of look like a couple of spikes sticking out of some pink stuff. They don't look as if they'd serve any sort of purpose. The Gums also look as though they are bone dry. You should paint on some stronger highlights on them to make them look a bit more juicey, same with the teeth.
Here are some random teeth from some prop shop
I figure they have a nice ferocious monster quality.
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The teeth bother me a great deal, because they just sort of look like a couple of spikes sticking out of some pink stuff. They don't look as if they'd serve any sort of purpose. The Gums also look as though they are bone dry. You should paint on some stronger highlights on them to make them look a bit more juicey, same with the teeth.
Here are some random teeth from some prop shop
I figure they have a nice ferocious monster quality.
It also could use some texture.