Another character

Davett29

Hey guys,

Im making another character at the moment. I was wondering if you all can critique it before I texture it. Thanks.

low odor

hmmm..you need to give your character some character...at the moment he is suffering form manaquinitis...but first things first. Go back to your reference and double check your anatomy..torso..arm shoulder connection. Hands look small to me...His posture looks rigid.. Proportions just feel wonky

tremulant

ninja, with skater shoes?

Joao Sapiro

P.S - just make a viewport grab as GI is crap to show off lowpoly models.

conte

make better gi render please, i can't see photons...
kidding, agree with Johny- just make screengrabs.

Jeremy Lindstrom

looks like quite a few 5 sided poly's on the back of the head there with the neck/head meet.

gavku

try to stay way from so many straight lines....eg. you pretty much have 3 cuts running straight down the centre of your model, also around his torso you seems to have rings that dont really add much to the shape of your model. Tweak these to give him better form.

verybad

Some back musculature would help.