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Angel with hammer

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Marine polycounter lvl 19
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got bored of fiddling with it and immediately undoing the changes. went too lowpoly with it, and i hate the feet.

theres a bunch of wip pics in the same folder

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  • MoP
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    MoP polycounter lvl 18
    Man, you can do better than this. I can't even tell that it's normal mapped. It's not adding anything... I'm sure you could make it better looking if you just painted a good old-fashioned diffuse map alone.

    However, the model itself needs some work... proportions are fairly stiff and generically boring, the wings just look shoddily tacked on - if you're gonna do a design like that, at least make an effort to push it to an extreme.
    The armour design is similarly re-hashed and boring. No interesting style or shapes there.

    Your polygon usage is very linear and rigid... it needs more organic flow to make the mesh less stiff.

    I clicked on this thread thinking "Cool, I haven't seen Marine doing anything recently!" but frankly I'm disappointed because I know you can do better work than this.
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