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Old man bust

Jelmer
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Jelmer polycounter lvl 17
Just a fun little thing, because older men are fun to sculpt. C&C welcome.

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  • fogmann
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    fogmann polycounter lvl 17
    Nice work, Jelmer. One thing I noticed right away is that the mouth looks a lot like your octo man model. I thought the mouth shape looked fine on him, because he is not really a human, but this model seems very human and that mouth shape doesn't seem to sit very well on him. The corners of the mouth usually can't reach that low down the jaw. I would say forehead could have some more defined wrinkles, and the ears look a bit odd. Also, perhaps the nose could use some irregularities, because it seems like the underlying structure has a geometric shape. Otherwise, I think it looks very good.

    Btw, I clicked on your sig link to check on your octo before I comment and you forgot to put the dot after www so the link doesn't work.
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