Challenge #30 SF Redesign_tacit math_twelve
polycounter lvl 17
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always liked this guy. the shmoo of the street fighter universe
always liked this guy. the shmoo of the street fighter universe
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Post haste, maketh him!
started roughing in his form and proportions. the blade hands are just a dummy for the moment
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but hell, the proportions are better than what i could do.
I would say at the moment the original has more personality, and cooler proportions, but I understand its WIP. Wish my crits were constructive but I cant think of anything else to say
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updated the turnaround :
also, he needs more edge loops on the shoulders and calves. Also wasting a shit load of polys all around. If it doesnt help the outline form then its not worth having.
nah. they're playblasts from maya's viewport. converted to gif's in imageready as you said
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bust some gnar man, im startin to loose faith!
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I think it could do with a bit more definition between the pectoral and the deltoid, and making the ankles more pronounced would probably make the silhouette of the lower half of the body more interesting.
and. as we do :
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The backs of his calves are very oddly sharp (i'm sure someone made a similar crit on a different model of yours recently too, maybe check that out
Are you going to put any colour in the texture at all? I think some subtle hues would really sell this guy. At the moment he just looks like you haven't textured him.
That weapon arm is just great though.
Nice work!
And yes, this has been a very impressive comp, loads of solid turnouts!