Self portrait and website.

dkorch

finished my self portrait for those who saw it, and got my website up. would love some crits of both, thanks all.

my website

Toomas

Add a loop between pecs and collarbone.
Also the highlight on pecs is too sharp.
Right now it looks like you have some weird edgy manboobs

MAUL0r

hah! that looks like u dude. nice one.

Slingshot

Hey nice stuff, your web site looks nice too.
But a couple of small things that pop up right away, if you fixed would improve your website / character display.

.The characters have a white pix halo around them which needs to be removed.

.I would also make the shadow smaller behind the 3-D character thumbnails.

But other than that you have a nice portfolio going there.

Squirmy

Looks good. The the shirt wrinkles on the back look vague maybe define them more

dkorch

hey all, thanks for the crits its great to hear. Ill definatly take care of those things. anyone got anything else crits and comments always welcome.

thanks again.

Rick Stirling

Watch the length of those shorts - that knee length is a bastard to get to deform properly. Making them a bit shorter or longer will just make life easier.

dkorch

thanks rick, actually I played around with that alot and making them longer gave me some really weird looking proportions that just didnt work, and making it shorter (above the knee) made me look really gay haha so I decided to add a few itterations around it and just go with it, it shouldnt be to much of an issue. thanks though.