ram sorcerer

makoa

sup everybody, just wanted to get some feedback on this. he blows on his horn to put you to sleep, then he eats you. 3200 tris. 2x512 maps. still need to do spec but wanted some input. thanks!



wires -

conte

Wow, awesome. So cool!=)
but hoofs is little bit odd.
great work!

AstroZombie

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Man, the model looks nice but do you really need to threaten me that way?

Neo_God

He looks like he should be hunched over a bit. There's just something about his head sticking up like that that looks off.

Other than, good stuff!

warby

solid stuff but thers this one white pixel on his back which makes me believe you forgot to join a bunch of verts there ^^

Xaltar

The legs look a bit off, I can't quite put my finger on it though.....
Maybe check out the Fawns from Narnia....

That said its looking awesome

PoR3

Looking so nice, very good texture

makoa

sweet, thanks for the crits guys, they are appreciated.

neogod- thanks i'll fiddle with his posture a bit, he's a little stiff overall i think.

warby - haha, you caught me!

xaltar - hmm yea, i was having trouble with the proportions of his legs i think it might be that. thanks though.

noritsune

He's got a nice look overall, the color palette is working well and the proportions look solid to me. As an improvement, I would suggest trying to give the texture more of a unified focus - keeping the brightness and saturation concentrated around the head and chest area would help. It's just that right now, there's a lot of variation in value and contrast happening all over the model, and it's not tying together visually as well as it could.

Also, seems to be some discrepancies in texture resolution across different parts of the model. His loincloth is pretty sharp, but the shawl thing is looking blurry, likewise the horn. might be too late to fix that here.

Nice design overall. I think that alpha-blended fringe on the shawl might get you into trouble in-engine?

Mark Dygert

Is his horn also a straw? hahaha

I really like it, great work!