WIP: Goku

Shady-D

Sorry im not too active on this board, its too much to read in too little time
head wires


Full Body front/Side


Wire render


C&C Highly apreciated!

Jerome

actully it looks good to me. although he might need some more lovin in the whole hips area and his feet have somethign looking wierd to me. you also have a bunch of polies in his pecs and trapezieus (sp??) opposed to a rather lower poly distribuion through out the rest of the mesh.. also could we get some specs on it? anyway keep at it.

Steve Schulze

New people always start out with a Goku model. What is it about him. Theres millions of other anime characters out there, many of which don't have such bizarre proportions which will only serve to throw off the proportions of future models... madness I say.

Anyway, He's looking pretty close to property. I think you're likely to run into problems with the elbows when you come to animate him.

Asherr

fix his lips. right now they look like he's had a few cologen injections.

Shady-D

@ jerome: he is 1318 triangles, i still have to cut out useless poly's, so thats why the everything is a bit overdetailed..
@ Jackablade: Lol.. im not new.. i started modeling goku a year ago.. coincedently with a goku as well.. lol the gap..

@ Asherr: I'll see what i can do about it

Thnx for the crits, keep em coming!

Shady-D

Update
I fixed the heads U shape and made it a bit more like a rotated D shape
Made some folds in the pants, bit baggier at the back
scaled the last 3 spikes.


Currently standing at over 3800 tris. Still have lots of cleaning up to do.

Pedro Amorim

lol.. and again he had a stroke on his hands! come on..look at his fingers..

snemmy

jackablade: probably because of the ease of finding reference.

you may want to bring the crotch up a little.
your cloth fold look really messy
his feet are way to short and stubby. especially for a DBZ character

Shady-D

last update on the model unless there are some good crits (Please? )


i tried to fix the feet, i cleaned up the folds, and.. yeah... thnx for the crits all!!

Wells

can we get a good shot of the hands? they look a little funky and stretched.

Shady-D

Ill trade ya for some good crits
polyflow is very messy, i just realised =/...

Wells

fingers look far too long on every shot except for the front... hmm.

His thumb is looking pretty unnatural at the moment. I think it might go down too far, and the angle looks sort of like his thumb broke.

here's a shot from the Blizzard! thread of Neo_God's hand. Take a look at the poly flow and position of the fingers and thumb.


over all, I'd say you've done a good job. definately one of the better goku's I've seen, the hair especially looks like a good translation to 3D.

I'd like to see a more realistic texture on him. Might be interesting, if only as a change from the norm.

Psyk0

Agreed, more palm, less fingers...at least in bottom view thats what it looks like. Maybe check palm proportions?, id center the hand with the wrist and adjust wrist scale...make the transition smoother after the "wrist band".

Check the thumb shape...your own hands are good reference .